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The Great Escape

_A tale of two hamsters and their daring adventure_

By SajaPublished 10 months ago 4 min read
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The Great Escape
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Here is a story I wrote for you. I hope you enjoy it.😊

Buddy and Fluffy were two hamsters who lived in a cage in a pet shop. They had everything they needed: food, water, bedding, toys, and each other. But they also had a dream: to escape and see the world.

They had been planning their escape for weeks, studying the layout of the shop, the habits of the staff, and the movements of the customers. They had also collected some items that they thought would be useful: a paper clip, a rubber band, a piece of string, and a marble.

One night, when the shop was closed and everyone was gone, they decided to make their move. They used the paper clip to unlock the cage door, then climbed out and ran across the floor. They dodged the sleeping cats, the snoring dogs, and the noisy parrots. They reached the back door of the shop, where they saw a small gap at the bottom.

They used the rubber band to shoot the marble at a nearby switch, which turned on the lights outside. They hoped this would distract any guards or cameras that might be watching. Then they used the string to pull the door handle down, creating a bigger gap for them to squeeze through.

They made it outside and felt the fresh air on their fur. They looked around and saw a busy street with cars, bikes, and people. They felt excited and scared at the same time. They decided to stick together and follow their instincts.

They ran across the street, dodging the traffic and the pedestrians. They saw a park with trees, grass, and flowers. They thought it looked like a paradise. They ran towards it, hoping to find a safe place to hide.

They reached the park and saw a pond with ducks, fish, and frogs. They thought it looked like a fun place to play. They ran towards it, hoping to find some friends.

They reached the pond and saw a bridge with a sign that said "Do not feed the animals". They thought it looked like a challenge. They ran towards it, hoping to find some food.

They reached the bridge and saw a man with a bag of bread crumbs. He was throwing them into the water for the ducks to eat. He did not notice the two hamsters running up behind him.

Buddy and Fluffy jumped onto his bag and grabbed some bread crumbs. They stuffed them into their cheeks and ran away. The man was startled and dropped his bag. He looked down and saw two hamsters running across the bridge with his bread crumbs.

He shouted "Hey! Stop! Those are my bread crumbs!" He chased after them, but they were too fast for him.

Buddy and Fluffy ran across the bridge and saw a tunnel with a sign that said "Subway". They thought it looked like an adventure. They ran towards it, hoping to find some new places.

They reached the tunnel and saw a train with doors that opened and closed. They saw people getting on and off. They thought it looked like a ride. They ran towards it, hoping to find some seats.

They reached the train and saw an empty seat with a newspaper on it. They jumped onto it and hid under the newspaper. The doors closed and the train started to move.

Buddy and Fluffy felt the train speeding up and slowing down. They heard noises from outside: horns, sirens, music, voices. They smelled different things: smoke, perfume, food, garbage. They wondered where they were going.

They peeked out from under the newspaper and saw different stations passing by: Central Park, Times Square, Grand Central Station... They realized they were in New York City!

They felt amazed and curious. They decided to get off at the next station and explore more.

They waited for the doors to open again and ran out of the train. They saw more people, more signs, more lights. They felt overwhelmed and lost.

They looked around for something familiar or friendly. They saw a pet shop with a sign that said "Hamsters for sale". They thought it looked like home.

They ran towards it, hoping to find some comfort.

They reached the pet shop and saw cages with hamsters in them. They looked like Buddy and Fluffy: brown, white, black... Some were sleeping, some were playing, some were eating.

Buddy and Fluffy felt happy and relieved. They decided to join them and stay there.

They climbed into one of the cages and greeted their new friends. The other hamsters welcomed them warmly.

Buddy and Fluffy told them their story: how they escaped from their cage in another pet shop, how they crossed the street, how they went to the park, how they stole bread crumbs from a man, how they rode on a train...

The other hamsters listened with awe and admiration. They thought Buddy and Fluffy were the coolest hamsters they had ever met.

They asked them if they wanted to stay with them. Buddy and Fluffy said yes.

They asked them if they wanted to escape again. Buddy and Fluffy said no.

They had seen enough of the world. They had had enough of adventure.

They just wanted to be hamsters.

They settled down in their new cage and enjoyed their new life. They had everything they needed: food, water, bedding, toys, and each other.

And they also had a memory: of the great escape.🐹

The end.

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