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Creating Twists and Surprises

Tips for Keeping Your Reader Guessing

By Barbara KingPublished 12 months ago 3 min read
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One of the most satisfying things for a reader is to be caught off guard by a surprising twist or turn in a story. As a writer, it can be challenging to craft these unexpected moments while still keeping the story believable and engaging. However, with a few tips and tricks, you can learn to create twists and surprises that will keep your readers guessing until the very end.

Set up expectations

To create a truly satisfying twist, you need to set up expectations for your reader. You can do this by introducing a situation or character that seems to be heading in a particular direction. For example, if your protagonist is trying to solve a mystery, the reader may expect that they will eventually succeed in their quest.

Subvert expectations

Once you've established these expectations, it's time to subvert them. This is where the twist comes in - you take the story in a different direction than the reader was anticipating. Maybe your protagonist doesn't solve the mystery after all, or they uncover a different, more surprising solution than the reader was expecting.

Foreshadow

While you don't want to give away the twist too early, it's important to foreshadow it so that it feels believable when it happens. Drop subtle hints throughout the story that something unexpected is coming. These hints can be as simple as a character mentioning a seemingly unimportant detail that later turns out to be significant.

Use misdirection

Another way to create surprises is through misdirection. This involves deliberately leading your reader down one path while secretly setting up a different one. For example, you might introduce a character who seems suspicious or untrustworthy, leading the reader to believe that they are the villain of the story, only to reveal later that someone else entirely is the true culprit.

Think outside the box

When creating twists and surprises, don't be afraid to think outside the box. The most satisfying surprises often come from unexpected places. Consider introducing a character or element that is seemingly unrelated to the story, only to reveal later that they are integral to the plot.

Be consistent

One of the biggest challenges of crafting twists and surprises is making sure they fit with the rest of the story. The twist should feel surprising, but not so jarring that it feels out of place. Make sure that everything in your story, from the characters to the setting, is consistent with the twist you're introducing.

Test it out

Before finalizing your twist, it's a good idea to test it out on a few readers. This will give you a sense of whether the surprise is working as intended or if it needs some tweaks. You don't want to give away the twist, of course, but you can ask readers if they found the story surprising or unexpected in any way.

In conclusion, creating twists and surprises in your story can be a powerful tool for keeping your readers engaged and invested in your characters. By setting up expectations, subverting them, foreshadowing, using misdirection, thinking outside the box, being consistent, and testing out your surprise on a few readers, you can craft a truly satisfying twist that will keep your readers guessing until the very end.

Keep writing!

With Love,

B.K. xo xo

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Barbara King

Barbara King is a full-time writing coach and novelist. King is a recent college graduate from Southern New Hampshire University where she earned her BA in Creative Writing.

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