What's in a Rule?
Spooky Microfiction Challenge entry.

There was only one rule: don’t open the door.
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A clock ticking in an empty room.
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That was all we could hear from the other side of the door with a lion’s head knocker: my wife, Alia, and me.
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For hours, we sat. Carefully listening for... anything. With just the wind howling quietly and the clock ticking.
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“The thing is,” I broke the silence. “We’re focused on the rule because we were told it was a rule.” “Now we’re thinking of nothing else. It’s like if someone said, ‘You must start your story with the line, “The river ran backwards on the day the Queen vanished.”’”
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“It sounds like a challenge but could stifle creativity. All you’d think about is the Queen vanishing and the river running backwards, distracting from telling a good story.”
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“When did the clock stop?” asked Alia, ignoring my philosophical musings. It was a fair question, as I had failed to notice silence behind the door during my musings. “What should we do?”
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As the howling wind picked up, blowing Alia’s brown locks and whipping against the door, I looked at her silently with a knowing smirk and then to the door, “Don’t panic”
Silence fell. Then—
Knock-knock.
Knock-KNOCK
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All she could do was panic.
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It was clunky— made by something large, fist-like
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Knock-knock—
Each strike reverberated.
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“What…was that, Hank??” Alia whispered between quickened breaths; darting looks at me then the shuddering door.
Knock-KNOCK, KNOCK-KNOCK
Like a loud, intense march.
“Hank?” turned to me again, her pupils dilating.
“The Beast Will Rise and Feast”, I whispered soothingly, tenderly pulling her close as screams became silence.
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Paul Stewart
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