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The Wail

That night, the eeriness violates the nature of my soul

By Kingto LIPublished 7 months ago 4 min read
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The Wail
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I'll never forget that fateful summer when my best friend, Jake, and I had an experience that still chills us to the bone. It was supposed to be a fun weekend trip to a remote cabin in the woods, but it turned into a haunting ordeal that defied reason and still haunts my dreams.

As we arrived at the cabin, nestled deep within the forest, I was immediately struck by the eerie stillness of the place. The silence was so thick it felt like it could suffocate us, and a sense of foreboding washed over me. But I dismissed it as mere nerves and decided to focus on having a good time with Jake.

The cabin itself was rustic but cozy, with wooden walls and a creaky porch that overlooked a small, tranquil lake. We spent the first day hiking, fishing, and enjoying the serene surroundings. But as the sun dipped below the horizon and darkness encroached, an unsettling feeling took hold.

That night, as we settled into our sleeping bags, the woods seemed to come alive with strange noises. Twigs snapped, leaves rustled, and distant whispers seemed to echo through the trees. I lay there, wide-eyed, trying to ignore it all, thinking my imagination was playing tricks on me.

Suddenly, Jake's whisper broke the silence. "Did you hear that?" he asked, his voice trembling.

I nodded, unable to speak. We strained our ears and heard a faint, mournful wail in the distance, like a woman weeping. Goosebumps prickled my skin.

"What is that?" I managed to whisper.

Jake and I decided to investigate. We grabbed flashlights and ventured into the night, following the eerie sound. The woods seemed to close in around us, and every step felt like a leap into the unknown.

We reached a clearing and saw a flickering light through the trees. It was a small, rundown cemetery, and at its center stood a crumbling mausoleum. The source of the ghostly cries became apparent as we heard the voice more clearly, a desperate plea for help.

Intrigued and concerned, we approached the mausoleum and cautiously pushed open the heavy, rusted door. A gust of cold air rushed out, and the cries intensified. Our flashlights revealed a young woman huddled in the corner, her tattered clothes and tear-streaked face a stark contrast to her pale, almost translucent skin.

"Please," she sobbed, "you have to help me."

Jake and I exchanged nervous glances but couldn't leave her there. We reached out and tried to comfort her, asking her name and how she had ended up in this eerie place.

She introduced herself as Emily and told us a horrifying tale. She'd been hiking in these woods with her friends a year ago when they stumbled upon this old cemetery. They had been drawn to the mausoleum, and, out of curiosity, they had dared her to enter. She had hesitated, but the others taunted her until, reluctantly, she went inside.

Emily described how, as soon as she entered the mausoleum, the door slammed shut behind her, trapping her in the pitch-black darkness. She heard eerie whispers and ghostly hands reaching for her. Terrified, she had cried out for her friends, but they couldn't hear her.

Time lost meaning for her as she struggled to escape. Food and water became scarce, and she had given up hope until the moment we arrived.

We were determined to help her escape this nightmare. As we tried to open the door, the eerie cries outside grew louder and more menacing. Shadows danced in the moonlight, and we could feel a malevolent presence closing in.

Finally, with a tremendous effort, we forced the door open, and Emily rushed out into the night. The moment she stepped outside, the cries ceased, and an otherworldly, unnatural silence fell over the cemetery. We fled the mausoleum and ran back to the cabin with Emily in tow.

The following day, we learned that Emily's friends had reported her missing a year ago, but their search had been in vain. Emily was still in shock and traumatized by her ordeal, but she was safe now.

As we shared our experience with others, some believed our story, while others dismissed it as a prank or a figment of our imagination. But Jake and I knew the truth. We had encountered something inexplicable in those woods, something that defied logic and reason.

Though Emily had escaped the clutches of that haunting place, the memory of that night still haunts us. The wailing cries, the eerie cemetery, and the malevolent force that tried to keep Emily imprisoned will forever be etched in our minds. We had experienced the supernatural, and no one can convince us otherwise.

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About the Creator

Kingto LI

inference, thoughts

detective stories, sad stories, personal stuff.

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