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The Portrait

A tale of sorrow and vengeance

By O. GrimleyPublished about a year ago 9 min read
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Part I: The Antique Shop

Late autumn had filled the quaint town of Derry, Maine, with the colors of rust and gold. A crisp chill clung to the air, and the scent of woodsmoke and decay lingered like a half-forgotten memory. On a desolate street lined with abandoned antique shops, there stood one whose dusty window still beckoned passersby with a single handwritten sign: “Closing Sale. Everything Must Go.”

Elaine and Hank Burrows, a middle-aged couple whose love for each other had only deepened with time, wandered into the dimly lit store with a sense of nostalgic curiosity. They had moved into their newly purchased Victorian home just a few weeks earlier and were hunting for antique furniture to complement its gothic ambiance.

The musty shop was a labyrinth of dust-covered relics and trinkets, each possessing its own tale of forgotten glory. The creaking floorboards and the faint ticking of an old grandfather clock filled the silence as they explored the shadowy aisles. As Elaine sifted through a collection of porcelain dolls, her gaze was irresistibly drawn to a large, ornately framed painting.

“Hey, Hank. Come look at this,” Elaine called to her husband, her voice barely a whisper.

Hank ambled over, his eyes widening as he took in the canvas. The painting displayed a beautiful woman standing in a dark, almost ethereal room, her pale visage illuminated by a single flickering candle. Her eyes, deep wells of sorrow, seemed to implore the observer for solace.

The couple exchanged glances, their mutual fascination unspoken yet palpable. They purchased the painting at a bargain price, and the old shopkeeper, a man with sunken eyes and a peculiar smile, gave them an ominous warning: “Some things are better left in the dark.”

Part II: The Unsettling Presence

The couple hung the painting in their living room, and it quickly became a conversation piece for their friends and family. The portrait’s haunting beauty left no one untouched, yet beneath the admiration, a shared unease lingered.

As days turned into weeks, an unsettling presence seemed to emanate from the portrait. The woman’s eyes appeared to follow them wherever they went, and the room would occasionally fill with an icy draft despite the roaring fireplace.

One night, as Elaine lay in bed, she heard the faintest sound of weeping echoing through the hallways. She woke Hank, and they searched the house, finding nothing amiss.

“I swear, Hank, it sounded like a woman crying,” Elaine insisted, her voice trembling.

Hank, trying to calm his wife, responded, “It’s probably just the wind, Elaine. Old houses like this have their share of creaks and groans.”

The eerie occurrence was quickly dismissed as a trick of the wind, but the atmosphere in the house continued to darken.

Part III: The Obsession

Elaine became obsessed with the portrait. She spent hours studying the mysterious woman’s face, her fingers tracing the brush strokes as if to find a hidden message. One day, she discovered a small, almost imperceptible inscription on the edge of the frame: “Evelyn Montgomery, 1897.”

Compelled by the name, Elaine and Hank researched the history of their home and the previous occupants. They discovered that Evelyn Montgomery had once lived there with her husband, a renowned artist, and their young daughter. The artist was said to have painted the portrait after the tragic death of his wife in a fire that had consumed their daughter’s bedroom.

“Can you imagine how terrible it must have been for them, Hank?” Elaine asked, her voice choked with emotion.

Hank nodded solemnly, the weight of their discovery heavy in his heart. “Yes, it’s a tragedy no parent should ever endure.”

Elaine felt a profound sadness for Evelyn and her lost child, and she began to experience vivid dreams in which she found herself wandering the halls of the house, searching for her own daughter in the flames. The line between dream and reality began to blur, and a creeping dread took hold of her.

Part IV: The Hidden Chamber

One evening, as Hank sat in the living room, he noticed a subtle change in the painting: Evelyn’s eyes, once filled with sorrow, now bore an expression of pure malice. A sense of foreboding washed over him, and he tore the painting from the wall, intending to burn it in the fireplace. But as the flames licked at the canvas, a blood-curdling scream echoed throughout the house, and he was compelled to rescue the portrait from the fire.

“What on earth are you doing, Hank?” Elaine exclaimed, her eyes wide with fear.

“I… I don’t know,” Hank stammered, his hands shaking as he held the smoldering painting. “I thought I saw something… evil in her eyes.”

That night, Elaine awoke to find herself standing in the doorway of their basement, the painting clutched tightly in her arms. She could not recall how she had come to be there, but she could hear the faint sound of a child’s laughter echoing through the dark, damp space. Trembling, she descended the wooden stairs, her heart pounding in her chest.

In the basement, she discovered a hidden door, long concealed behind a crumbling wall. With a deep breath, she pushed it open, revealing a dusty, forgotten chamber. There, in the center of the room, stood a small, charred crib. Beside it lay a wooden box filled with the charred remains of dolls and toys. Elaine’s eyes widened in horror as she realized the truth: the spirit of Evelyn Montgomery was trapped within the portrait, eternally searching for her daughter among the ashes of her tragic past.

As Elaine stared at the ghastly scene, she heard the soft rustle of fabric behind her. She turned to see the painting, and there, standing beside it, was the ghostly figure of Evelyn, her eyes filled with a mixture of grief and rage.

Part V: The Medium

Elaine’s scream echoed through the house, bringing Hank rushing to her side. Together, they faced the vengeful spirit, promising to help her find peace. The couple contacted a local medium, who performed a ceremony to release Evelyn from the portrait and guide her to the other side.

In the days that followed, the atmosphere in the house lightened, and the couple began to believe that the nightmare was over. But as they slept one night, a chilling wind blew through the open window, and the portrait, which they had placed in a storage room, began to shift and change.

The image of Evelyn faded away, leaving only the dark, empty room on the canvas. And in the corner, a flickering candle cast its eerie glow, revealing the faintest outline of a small, charred crib.

From the shadows, a child’s laughter echoed through the house, the spirit of Evelyn’s daughter, freed from the confines of her hidden tomb, seeking revenge for the eternal torment of her mother’s soul.

The horrifying truth of the portrait’s secret had only just begun to unfold. For as the cries of the ghostly child filled the night, Elaine and Hank would come to understand that some secrets should never be uncovered, and that there are things in the dark that should remain undisturbed.

As they lay awake, listening to the laughter of the vengeful spirit, they knew that their ordeal was far from over. Their once peaceful home had become a battleground for the lost souls of the past, and they were caught in the crossfire.

Determined to put an end to the haunting, Elaine and Hank sought the help of experts in the paranormal field. The investigation led them to the dark history of their home, uncovering the tragic events that had unfolded within its walls.

As they delved deeper into the house’s past, they discovered that the artist, Evelyn’s husband, had dabbled in the occult. His grief and obsession with reuniting with his lost wife had driven him to perform a forbidden ritual, binding Evelyn’s spirit to the portrait in an attempt to bring her back to the world of the living. Unbeknownst to him, the ritual had also unleashed the tormented soul of their daughter, who had been trapped in the burnt remains of her room.

The couple, armed with this newfound knowledge, sought the help of a renowned exorcist to cleanse their home of the malevolent spirits that had taken hold. As the exorcist performed the ritual, the air grew thick with tension, and an unseen force seemed to resist their every effort.

Finally, as the last incantation was spoken, the portrait trembled violently, and the ghostly figures of Evelyn and her daughter appeared before them. Their eyes, once filled with rage and sorrow, now bore an expression of gratitude and relief.

With a final, mournful look at Elaine and Hank, the spirits vanished, leaving the house silent and empty. The portrait, too, had changed, now displaying a serene image of Evelyn and her daughter, reunited in the afterlife.

As the couple stood in the stillness, they knew that the darkness that had once shrouded their home had been lifted. The long-lost souls had found peace at last, and the portrait’s secret, now revealed, would no longer haunt their dreams.

In the end, Elaine and Hank had learned a lesson they would never forget: that some things are better left undisturbed, and that the past, no matter how dark and tragic, has a way of reaching out and touching the present. They had faced the shadows in their home and emerged stronger, their love for each other unwavering in the face of the unknown.

And as they gazed upon the portrait one last time before placing it in storage, they knew that they would never again underestimate the power of the unseen, for in the shadows of our world, there are secrets that should remain forever buried.

THE END.

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O. Grimley

Cryptic weaver of nightmares, I delve into humanity's shadows, unearthing fears to craft chilling tales. Embrace the darkness within my words.

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