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Lost In The Forest

A Tale of Terror and Survival

By Ayyan KhananiPublished about a year ago 3 min read

As the sun set behind the trees, painting the sky with shades of orange and pink like an artist’s canvas, Jane and John realized they were lost. The forest, which had seemed so beautiful during the day with its lush greenery and chirping birds like a symphony of nature, now took on a sinister appearance. The shadows grew longer, stretching out like dark fingers across the forest floor. The rustling of leaves sent shivers down their spines like icy fingers.

“We need to find our way out of here,” Jane said, her voice shaking like a leaf in the wind.

“I know,” John replied. “But which way do we go?”

They stumbled through the underbrush, tripping over roots and branches like clumsy dancers. As they walked, they heard strange noises all around them. The howling of wolves in the distance like mournful cries. The hooting of owls like ominous warnings. And something else… something that sounded like footsteps.

“Do you hear that?” Jane whispered.

“Hear what?” John asked.

“Those footsteps. They’re getting closer.”

They turned around and saw a dark figure emerging from the shadows like a nightmare come to life. It was tall and thin, with long arms and legs. Its eyes glowed red in the darkness like burning coals.

“Run!” John shouted.

They took off through the forest, their hearts pounding like drums in their chests. They could hear the creature chasing after them, its footsteps growing louder and louder like thunder in their ears. They ran until they couldn’t run anymore and collapsed on the ground, gasping for breath like fish out of water.

“We have to keep going,” Jane said, pulling herself to her feet.

They continued on, driven by fear like a whip at their backs. As they walked, they encountered other challenges - a raging river that they had to cross by jumping from stone to stone like frogs; a steep cliff that they had to climb using vines like ropes. But somehow they managed to overcome them all like heroes in an epic tale.

As they walked deeper into the forest, they came across an old cabin. The door was hanging off its hinges and the windows were broken like shattered dreams.

“Maybe we can hide in there,” Jane said.

They crept inside and found a dusty old room with a fireplace and a table. There was a musty smell in the air like forgotten memories and cobwebs hung from the ceiling like tattered curtains.

“This place gives me the creeps,” John said.

“We’ll be safe here,” Jane replied. “We can block the door with this table.”

They pushed the table against the door and sat down on the floor, their backs against the wall. They listened to the sounds of the forest outside - the howling of wolves like mournful cries; the hooting of owls like ominous warnings… and those footsteps getting closer and closer.

Suddenly there was a loud banging on the door like an angry fist. They looked at each other in terror as it shook on its hinges.

“It’s trying to get in!” John shouted.

They pushed against the table with all their might, trying to keep it in place. But it was no use - with one final bang like a gunshot, the door burst open and two creatures stepped into the room.

They were tall and thin, with long arms and legs. Their skin was pale and their eyes glowed red in the darkness like twin flames. They reached out towards Jane and John with clawed hands…

And then there was a blinding flash of light as lightning struck a tree outside. In that moment of illumination, Jane and John saw that it wasn’t two creatures at all - it was just two men wearing masks!

The men stumbled backwards as Jane and John leapt to their feet. They ran past them and out into the forest, not stopping until they reached safety.

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Comments (2)

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    Ayyan, I really appreciate your descriptive language in this story. You create such vivd imagery for the reader as you personified the shadows in your opening scene. I was glued to the screen and waiting in bated breath as you set an intense scene. I also appreciate your use of simile when describing the intensity of which the characters feel the fear set upon them by the pursuing shadow being. I was not ready for the shadow beings to turn out to be human beings in disguise. Nicely played!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Your descriptive narrative truly transported me into the eerie depths of the forest, leaving me on the edge of my seat with each suspenseful turn. The way you painted the setting with vivid details and skillful word choices allowed me to visualize every shadowy tree and hear every rustling leaf. Moreover, your ability to build tension and maintain a sense of mystery throughout the story is commendable. The anticipation and sense of foreboding that you created kept me hooked from beginning to end, eagerly awaiting the fate of the protagonist. The twists and surprises you incorporated added an extra layer of excitement and intrigue, making it impossible to put the story down. Your writing style exhibits a wonderful balance between eloquence and simplicity, making the story accessible and enjoyable to a wide range of readers. I appreciate the attention to detail you showed in developing both the main character and the atmospheric backdrop. It allowed me to connect with the protagonist's emotions and share in their harrowing experience.

AKWritten by Ayyan Khanani

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