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Horror Story Prompt Challenge: "The Last Command"

In the cold expanse of space, who do you trust when the world below turns to ashes?

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 3 min read
Credit: Karina "ScreamQueen" Adelgaard

Horror Story Prompt Challenge: "The Last Command" 🚀💥

PROMPT: An astronaut and cosmonaut are aboard the International Space Station when a catastrophic event unfolds below: their home countries are on the brink of nuclear war. Communications are severed, and amidst the chaos, they receive their final orders from their governments—to eliminate the other. ⚡💔

Trapped in a metal fortress orbiting the Earth, the two astronauts are forced to confront the unimaginable: do they follow orders, or do they try to defy them? With the deadly countdown ticking, suspicion mounts, and the tension grows unbearable. As their time on the ISS dwindles, paranoia and fear take root. What happens when trust becomes a luxury they can no longer afford? 🕰️🌀

Requirements:

Set your story on the International Space Station or another space station in orbit with 1000 words or more. 🌌

Explore themes of isolation, duty, trust, and survival under extreme pressure. 😨💡

The astronaut and cosmonaut must struggle with their conflicting loyalties—both to their countries and to each other. ⚔️🤔

The tension should build into a psychological horror, where the terror isn’t just physical but rooted in their unraveling sanity. 😱🧠

Show the emotional and moral deterioration as the characters are pushed toward their tragic, inevitable fate. 💔

Challenge Twist:

As the countdown to a potential nuclear catastrophe continues, both astronauts begin to question whether the orders they’ve received are even real—or if they’ve been manipulated by an unknown force. 🕳️🔮

The ISS itself could be a haunted place, where the isolation causes them to experience unsettling visions or messages from their past. 👻🚨

Prizes:

1st Place: $20.00 Tip 🏆💵

2nd Place: $10.00 Tip 🥈💵

3rd Place: $5.00 Tip 🥉💵

Instructions:

Post your completed horror story in the comments section of this article. ✍️

The winner will be selected based on how well they build suspense, psychological tension, and the horror of the situation. 🧩🕵️‍♂️

Submit your entry by April 20th, and winners will be named on May 1st! 🗓️🎉 Explore what happens when the bonds of humanity shatter in the vacuum of space! 🌠🚀

Entry’s Received Index

Entry received By Marie381Uk - Astronauts Watch The End Of Our Earth - A nuclear war no one can stop. THE END OF EARTH

Entry received by the Content Crafter - Belief in The International Space Station - When nuclear war threatened the Earth, two astronauts ventured into the void—torn between order and conscience.

Entry Recieved By Ellie Hoovs - The Edge of Silence - A Prompt from Dr. Jason - The Last Command

Entry Received by Skyler Saunders - TP-82 An astronaut and a cosmonaut receive distressing communications from Earth.

Entry Received by Sandor Szabo - The Dead Man’s Switch - The Last Command / Response to Dr Jason’s Story Prompt

Entry Received by Antoni De'Leon - What happens in Outer Space... ...stays in Outer Space - Dr Jason Benskin's horror prompt

Entry Received by C. Rommial Butler - The Way Out Is Through - An Entry for Doc's Horror Story Prompt Challenge

Entry Received by Diane Foster - Two Crewmates. One Mission - An entry for Dr Jason's challenge

Entry Received by Carolina Borges - When the World Went Quiet - A Psychological Horror Story Set on the ISS. Submitted for Dr. Jason Benskin's 'The Last Command' Challenge.

Winners of Challenge

🎉 Announcing the Winners of “The Last Command” Horror Story Prompt Challenge! 🎉 Hosted by Dr. Jason Benskin

📚💀 Where fear meets imagination...

After reading through bone-chilling entries and spine-tingling tales, we're thrilled to announce the top 3 winners who truly delivered terror in its finest form. 🕯️👻

🥇 1st Place – $20.00 Tip 🏆💵

“The Edge of Silence - A Prompt from Dr. Jason - The Last Command” By: Ellie A haunting tale of isolation and obedience pushed to their breaking point.

🖋️ Read it here: The Edge of Silence

🥈 2nd Place – $10.00 Tip 🥈💵

“The Way Out Is Through - An Entry for Doc's Horror Story Prompt Challenge” By: C. Rommial Butler - A psychological descent where survival means surrendering to the unknown.

🖋️ Read it here: The Way Out Is Through

🥉 3rd Place – $5.00 Tip 🥉💵

“What Happens in Outer Space... Stays in Outer Space” – Dr. Jason Benskin's Horror Prompt By: Antoni De'Leon - Terror among the stars, where no one can hear your final command.

🖋️ Read it here: What Happens in Outer Space...

👏 A huge thank you to everyone who participated in this eerie challenge. Your creativity and commitment to the horror genre are what keep nightmares alive. Stay tuned for the next fright-filled prompt from Dr. Jason

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