Do Not Scream
Stay a While
The boat was called Serenity Tide, which felt like a promise when they first stepped aboard the small cruise vessel—six friends, wind-tangled hair, a reason to celebrate.
“Thirty,” Ava announced, raising her glass of champagne as the dock slipped away behind them. “Best birthday ever!”
Evan grinned, an arm slung around her shoulders. "It's easier to get older than wiser."
Kim nudged him. The others laughed. It was easy laughter, the kind that came from history—shared apartments, breakups survived, inside jokes worn smooth from repetition.
Three couples. Ava and Evan. Kim and Tom. Bryce and Sedona.
And one captain, a quiet older man named Whitaker, who nodded politely and kept to the wheelhouse.
By sunset, the shoreline had disappeared into a smudge of orange and gray. The ocean stretched out, endless and indifferent. Music played softly from a Bluetooth speaker. They danced. They drank too much. The couples kissed like it was still the beginning of things.
It felt safe. Private. Like the world had paused just for them.
By midnight, the stars were out in full, scattered like glitter across the sky. One by one, they drifted below deck, claiming bunks, laughter fading into yawns, then silence.
The boat rocked gently.
The ocean breathed.
Kim woke first.
Something felt… off.
Not obvious. Just wrong in the way it feels when someone else is standing too closely.
She sat up slowly, rubbing her eyes. The cabin was dim, early morning light leaking in through the small portholes. Everyone else was still asleep.
“Tom?” she whispered.
No response. He was sprawled beside her, mouth slightly open, dead to the world.
Kim swung her legs over the side of the bunk and stood. The floor creaked under her weight. She hesitated, listening.
Nothing.
No footsteps overhead.
No hum of the engine.
That was what had woken her.
The silence.
She moved toward the stairs, each step cautious, her pulse picking up for no reason she could explain.
“Captain?” she called softly as she pushed the door open to the deck.
The morning was gray. The sea flat and endless.
And the wheelhouse door was open.
Kim frowned and stepped inside. That’s when she saw him.
Captain Whitaker lay slumped against the console, throat slit so deeply his head tilted at an unnatural angle. Blood had dried in a dark, sticky arc across the controls.
Kim inhaled and a scream ripped from her throat.
It cut off—not because she stopped, but because something else did. A sharp, cracking sound echoed like a firecracker and Kim dropped instantly, her body crumpling beside the captain, dead before she hit the floor.
Below deck, the others jolted awake.
“What was that?” Sedona asked, scrambling up.
“That sounded like a gun,” Bryce said, already moving toward the stairs.
“Kim!” Tom breathed, alarm rising in his voice.
They rushed up together, adrenaline overriding grogginess.
Tom reached the wheelhouse first.
He froze.
“Kim?”
She lay on the floor, eyes wide, blood pooling beneath her head.
“KIMMY!” he screamed.
The same sharp crack split the air.
Tom’s body jerked violently and collapsed beside her.
Silence.
Thick. Suffocating.
The remaining four stood frozen, shock crashing into them all at once.
Ava’s voice trembled. “What… just happened?”
Evan grabbed her arm, pulling her back. “Don’t—don’t yell.”
“Why?” she whispered.
As if in answer, the boat’s speakers crackled to life. A voice filled the air—flat, electronic, almost human but not quite. “If you scream, you die.”
The words echoed, “If you scream, you die.”
Bryce swallowed hard. “What the hell is this?”
“No signal,” Sedona said, holding up her phone.
Bryce tried his. Same result.
Ava shook her head, backing away from the wheelhouse. “This isn’t real. This is some kind of prank or something.”
“Does that look like a prank?” Bryce whispered, gesturing toward the bodies.
The voice returned.
“Communication has been disabled. The ignition key has been removed. You are alone.”
A pause.
Then, almost gently: “Do not scream.”
Panic settled in differently for each of them.
Evan went quiet, calculating, his eyes darting everywhere.
Ava clung to him, trembling.
Bryce paced, fists clenched, anger simmering just beneath the surface.
Sedona stood very still, listening.
“Someone’s on this boat,” Bryce said under his breath. “They have to be.”
“Or something is watching,” Sedona murmured.
“Shhh,” Bryce hissed.
They searched every cabin. Every storage compartment. Every inch of deck.
No one.
No hidden stowaways. No sign of forced entry. Just the four of them… and the dead.
“And no key,” Ava said, voice barely audible.
Evan checked the ignition again. Empty.
“We’re drifting,” he said. “No control. No way to call for help.”
Bryce slammed his fist against the wall—hard enough to hurt, but not enough to make noise beyond a grunt. “This is insane.”
The speaker crackled again.
“Remain calm.”
Bryce stared up at it. “Or what?”
Silence.
Then:
“Or die.”
They tried whispering plans.
Stay together. Stay quiet. Figure out where the sound system was being controlled from. That turning out to be more difficult than they anticipated.
Time passed. Minutes stretched. Every creak of the boat sounded like footsteps.
At some point, Ava began to cry—soft, choking sobs she tried desperately to suppress.
Evan held her, murmuring reassurances that sounded hollow even to him.
Sedona suddenly turned her head. “Did you hear that?”
Everyone froze.
A faint scraping sound… from the deck.
Bryce gestured. Stay.
He moved toward the stairs, careful, slow.
Each step up creaked despite his effort.
The scraping grew louder.
He reached the deck. The corridor was empty.
But the door to the wheelhouse was slightly ajar.
Bryce pushed it open.
Inside, the room was exactly as they’d left it.
Except—
The bodies were gone.
Ryan stumbled back, eyes wide.
He forgot himself.
“What the—” the words broke into a shout.
And the crack came instantly.
Bryce dropped, his body hitting the floor with a dull thud.
Downstairs, the others heard it.
Sedona closed her eyes.
Ava pressed her face into Evan’s chest, shaking violently.
Evan didn’t move.
Didn’t speak.
Didn’t breathe.
Now he understood. It wasn’t just about noise. It was about them.
Their fear.
Their reactions.
They were being watched, studied, hunted.
The speaker came alive once more.
“Three remain.”
A pause.
“Do not scream.”
Hours passed. Thirst and hunger plagued them. Exhaustion gnawed at their nerves.
They barely spoke.
Just gestures. Looks. Shared terror.
At some point, Sedona slipped away.
Evan didn’t notice immediately.
When he did, his stomach dropped.
He looked at Ava.
She shook her head, eyes wide.
They moved together, searching again.
“Sedona?” Evan whispered.
No answer.
They reached the back deck.
The ocean stretched endlessly.
And there—by the railing—stood Sedona.
Perfectly still.
Facing away.
Evan approached slowly.
“Sedona?” he whispered again.
She turned.
Her face was pale, and her mouth was open in a silent scream.
Her throat had been cut.
Her body swayed—then collapsed.
Ava flinched, a strangled sound catching in her throat.
Evan clamped a hand over her mouth just in time.
They stood there, shaking, staring at the body.
The speaker clicked on.
“Two remain.”
Night fell again.
The boat drifted in darkness.
Evan and Ava huddled together, backs against the wall, refusing to sleep.
Refusing to separate.
“We’re going to get out of this,” Evan whispered.
Ava nodded, though she didn’t believe it.
Neither did he.
A soft sound came from the wheelhouse.
A click.
Evan looked up.
The ignition panel. Something gleamed there. The key.
It was back.
Evan’s eyes narrowed. A trap. It had to be, but it was also their only chance.
He looked at Ava. She understood immediately. Slowly, carefully, they stood. Each step toward the wheelhouse felt like stepping into a sniper’s scope.
Evan reached the panel. His hand hovered over the key.
The speaker crackled.
“Final test.”
Evan froze.
“Only one may leave.”
Ava’s grip on his arm tightened.
“No…” she whispered.
Evan swallowed.
The ocean roared softly outside.
The silence inside was suffocating.
He looked at her.
Thirty years old. Terrified. Trusting him.
He made a choice. Evan grabbed the key.
Ava gasped—not a scream, but close.
Too close.
The crack exploded through the night.
Evan dropped instantly.
The key clattered to the floor.
Ava stood alone.
Breathing hard.
Shaking.
Alive.
The speaker spoke one last time.
“Congratulations.”
A pause.
“You did not scream.”
The boat’s engine roared to life remotely somehow.
Soon, the horizon flickered with distant lights—shoreline, finally visible.
Ava sank to her knees, tears streaming silently down her face.
Around her, the bodies remained.
Still.
Watching.
As the boat carried her to shore.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
I'm a soon-to-be retired music educator. This is my 40th and final year at the same school. I enjoy writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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