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My Last Day In Babylon

Just when you think you know someone...

By Ray YoungPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
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Our story opens in the year 605 BC in Babylon Mesopotamia.

Evening had arrived and it was time to pick up my girlfriend Mylitta. We had been seeing each other for almost six weeks. She had been introduced to me by my best friend Usun. Beautiful long dark hair, a slender shape with amazing breasts. Great personality, easy to talk to, and very sensual. It was getting dark so we found a romantic place to eat. We were playing footsie under the table as she ran her foot up my thigh coming to rest between my legs. She knows how to communicate. After dinner we were sitting down along the river when she handed me a piece of candy. I offered to share it with her, but she said it was just for me. It tasted wonderful. We sat there kissing for a while but I began to feel strange. She told me to lay down and relax. And that was the last thing I remembered.

I woke up the next morning totally naked and tied down to a large stone altar. A curious group of young women were gathering around me. One of them stepped forward.

"Good morning. I see the sedative has worn off. I hope we have made you comfortable."

"What the hell is going on here? What happened to my clothes and why am I tied down like this? How did I even get here?"

"Your girlfriend slipped you a little sleeping potion we provided. She was boasting about your size as we haggled over the price. I can see now that you were worth every shekel."

"She sold me?? That BITCH !!!"

"I don't blame her. If someone offered me that much money, I would have sold my boyfriend too. It's easy to find another. So let me introduce myself, I am Goddess Ishtar, mediator of this temple. Once a year we pay tribute to Viagra, god of fertility."

"Fertility? Is that why I'm naked?" I heard some snickering from the crowd as the priestess began to fondle me. The congregation began taking off their robes and moving closer. I knew exactly what they wanted to see, and it wasn't long before everyone was admiring a healthy erection.

"Pardon me while I say a few words. GREETINGS DEAR SISTERS, AS YOU CAN SEE, WE HAVE AN EXCEPTIONAL CANDIDATE THIS YEAR, AND FOR THAT WE GIVE THANKS. LET US PRAY, OH GREAT VIAGRA, GIVER OF STRENGTH AND ENDURANCE, ACCEPT THIS OUR HUMBLE OFFERING, THAT WE MAY BE BLESSED WITH EVERLASTING PLEASURE. AMEN."

She moved around to the back of the altar so all could see. Everyone was watching intently as I was being lubricated with warm oil. She took a firm grip and began moving her hand. I turned my head towards the audience and was amazed. I had never seen so many beautiful naked women. It felt weird being on display like this, but part of me was enjoying the attention. The pace quickened and soon I was groaning and pulling at the ropes. Her grip tightened as my body tensed. I was getting so close. The crowd seemed to sense it and began chanting. A few young girls pushed through the gathering for a better view. One of them pointed at me and giggled, while another began to pleasure herself. Watching her was all it took to send me over the edge. My back arched as powerful surges sent explosive eruptions gushing all over my chest. The crowd cheered as the priestess picked up a large metal blade and dramatically lifted it above her head. "Oh SHIT !!!"

"GREAT VIAGRA, ACCEPT THIS WORTHY SACRIFICE."

Her arm came plunging down just as the alarm clock went off...

I could hear Mom yelling something about being late for school. I rubbed my eyes and threw off the covers, finding myself drenched in cum.

Damn that was so cool...

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About the Creator

Ray Young

I am a fantasy fiction hobby writer. Most of my material is erotic in nature. But I have fun with it and it keeps me out of trouble.

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