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Joan's Room

chapter 1

By Forest GreenPublished 2 months ago • 3 min read
Joan's Room
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The chime above the hotel’s revolving doors was a familiar soundtrack to Paul’s evenings. Another guest, another name to check off, another key card to activate. He was halfway through restocking the mini-bar snacks when the chime sang again, a little brighter this time, or so it seemed to Paul.

He didn't need to look up to know who it was. The scent of jasmine and something subtly musky always preceded her, a fragrant herald. Joan.

Paul had seen Joan check in countless times over the past year. She was a regular, an executive who traveled for business, always impeccably dressed, always with that confident stride that made heads turn. But it wasn't just her elegance that caught Paul's eye. It was the way her skirts clung just so when she walked away, the gentle sway of her hips that would etch itself into his mind for hours after she’d ascended to her room.

He'd imagined it, of course. Not in a crude, vulgar way, not exactly. More like a silent, visceral hum beneath his professional facade. He’d picture her, bent over the reception desk, perhaps fumbling with her purse, and a heat would bloom low in his belly. The thought of reaching out, of pulling her close, of pressing against her from behind, a sudden, raw urgency. He’d shake his head, clearing the image, chastising himself. Professional, Paul. Remember yourself.

But then she’d turn, and the smile she offered him, polite and a little tired from her travels, would undo all his self-admonishments. Her eyes, a startling shade of hazel, would meet his, and for a fleeting second, he’d feel a connection, a spark that was probably all in his head but felt intensely real.

Tonight, she approached the counter, pulling her sleek carry-on behind her. Her tailored blazer was a deep sapphire, accentuating her figure in a way that made Paul’s palms tingle. "Good evening, Paul," she said, her voice smooth, a little deeper than he expected for someone so refined.

"Good evening," he replied, his voice a little gruffer than he intended, a slight catch he hoped she wouldn’t notice. He kept his gaze on the screen, his fingers flying over the keyboard, but every fiber of his being was acutely aware of her presence. The way her hair, a glossy auburn, fell over her shoulders, the delicate curve of her neck as she peered at the reservation details he was pulling up.

"Just checking in, as usual," she said, a hint of amusement in her tone.

"Right this way," Paul said, sliding the key card across the polished counter. As she reached for it, her fingers brushed his, a fleeting, electric contact. His breath hitched. He watched as she picked up her bag, turning slightly, her back to him as she headed towards the elevators.

The jasmine and musk lingered. And as he watched her walk away, the silent hum within him intensified, a low, insistent thrum that spoke of all the things he dared not say, all the desires he kept locked away behind the polite smile of a hotel clerk. He took a slow, deep breath, the scent of her filling his lungs, and went back to restocking the mini-bar snacks. Tonight, sleep would be a long time coming.

The last sliver of amber light clung to the horizon as Paul’s knuckles brushed against Joan’s apartment door. The day had been a relentless series of spreadsheets and strained pleasantries, and he’d almost talked himself out of this impromptu visit. But something, a flicker of something in her eyes during their last meeting, had propelled him here.

The door opened almost immediately, and Paul’s breath hitched.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green