
"Wait," Jake whispered, his hand freezing on the doorframe. He reached back, his fingers grazing the small of Hannah's back to pull her back into the shadows of the closet for one more second. He reached into his pocket and produced the screwdriver, holding it up like a trophy. "I actually managed to snag it before we went in. I'm not that much of a disaster."
"I was thinking," he started, his voice cautious. "About the 'winging it' part. I don't want to wing it. Not this part. I'm a mess, Hannah, and I'll probably still forget my wallet at every dinner for the next thirty years, but I’m very certain about the part where I want to be the person who does that with you."
Hannah felt the air leave her lungs, not in a spike of panic, but in a slow, grounding release. She looked at him—really looked at him—and saw the way he was biting his lip, the sudden flicker of vulnerability in his eyes. He was terrified, which was the most honest thing she had ever seen him be.
"Thirty years, huh?" Hannah murmured, her voice barely audible over the hum of the idling engine. She didn't look at him immediately; instead, she watched a single raindrop streak horizontally across the windshield, pushed by the evening breeze. "That's a very specific timeline, Jake. Very precise. Almost like you’ve actually thought about this."
Jake let out a soft, self-deprecating huff. "I’ve had a lot of time to think while you were explaining the proper way to organize a filing system. Believe me, mental math has been running in the background since junior year."
Hannah finally turned to him, her expression softening into something profoundly tender. She reached out, not to touch his face, but to gently tug on the collar of his shirt, pulling him just close enough that she could feel the heat radiating off him. "You're still a disaster," she whispered, "but you're a disaster I've grown quite fond of."
When he finally pulled up to the curb, the streetlights had flickered on, casting the neighborhood in a hazy, amber glow. Hannah didn't move to get out immediately. She stayed in the passenger seat, watching the way the light caught the edges of Jake’s profile, the stubborn set of his jaw and the softness in his eyes. For ten years, she had mapped out every detail of his existence—the way he took his coffee, the specific cadence of his laughter, the way he always forgot where he put his keys—but she realized she had been reading the map without ever actually visiting the destination.
She reached out, her fingers gripping the front of his shirt and pulling him forward with a sudden, decisive strength. The collision was soft but certain, their lips meeting in a kiss that lacked the frantic desperation of the supply closet, replaced by a slow, deliberate hunger. It was a claim—a confirmation that the bridge they had crossed earlier wasn't a fluke of adrenaline, but a destination they were both finally willing to inhabit.
The kiss deepened, tasting of the evening's lingering salt and a sudden, electric hunger. Jake’s hands, usually so prone to fidgeting, found a singular purpose as they slid down to her waist, lifting her effortlessly until her back pressed against the closed door of the apartment. The click of the lock engaging behind him sounded like a final punctuation mark on the rest of the world. For a moment, they just existed in that friction—the rough cotton of his shirt against her palms, the warmth of his breath ghosting over her skin.
They moved through the apartment in a state of semi-conscious coordination, a trail of discarded clothing marking the path like breadcrumbs. The minimalist precision of Hannah’s bedroom—the crisp white linens, the perfectly aligned nightstands—felt suddenly sterile, an empty stage waiting for the disruption that only Jake could provide. As they hit the mattress, the impact was heavy and unpolished, a tangle of limbs and breathless laughter that felt more honest than any curated moment Hannah had ever planned.
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Forest Green
Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.
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