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Whispers of the Otherworld

A Mysterious Encounter on the Train to Basingstoke

By Sergio RijoPublished 9 months ago 3 min read
Whispers of the Otherworld
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The rhythmic clatter of the train on the tracks provided a soothing backdrop to my daily commute. Every morning, my gaze wandered, as it often did, to the girl who seemed to dwell in a world of her own. She was a small, willowy figure with a face that exuded an otherworldly charm. Her eyes, bright and alive, danced with secrets and dreams known only to her. It was as if she were a creature from a fairy tale, a being of enchantment who had found her way into the mundane world of the morning commute.

Every day, she occupied the same seat, the one by the window that afforded her a view of the passing landscape. Her humming, which seemed like fragments of the same long, haunting song, was the only constant sound in her world. I watched her in silence, captivated by the enigma she presented.

For weeks, I hesitated to approach her, but her beguiling presence proved irresistible. One morning, gathering all my courage, I ventured to sit beside her. She turned to me, her smile as warm and engaging as I had imagined. Her conversation flowed effortlessly, and we spoke of life's mundane details, our dreams, and our hopes.

Yet, beneath her gentle demeanor, I sensed a profound distance, as if she were a star that shone brightly but was impossibly far away. She shared tales of her life, but they were always tinged with the bittersweet melody of transient moments, the kind that vanish like a wisp of smoke.

Despite our growing familiarity, she remained an enigma. She revealed that she had no phone, no permanent address, and no family she cared to speak of. It was as though she were an apparition of the rails, appearing each day, only to disappear into the fabric of the train itself when the sun set.

One Sunday afternoon, I made a decision that was to unravel the mystery of her existence. As we neared the station at Basingstoke, I watched as she rose from her seat and made her way toward the back of the train car. It was then that I discreetly followed, a sense of unease settling in the pit of my stomach.

As she entered the restroom, I waited for what felt like an eternity. The train's whistle blew, and the carriage lurched into motion. Panic began to well within me. I knocked on the restroom door, growing more frantic as the minutes ticked by. My heart pounded, and finally, I gave in to my growing fear and forced my way inside.

But what greeted me was far from the expected. I was no longer in the narrow, dimly lit train restroom, but instead, I found myself seated in her place, by the window, staring out at the passing scenery. The train had moved on, leaving the station behind.

A sense of profound disorientation overcame me as I looked around, bewildered by the inexplicable turn of events. What had happened? Where was she? It was then that I felt an overwhelming compulsion, an irresistible urge to hum the fragments of the haunting melody she had sung.

As I hummed, the world outside the window blurred into a surreal dreamscape. The landscape shifted, and I felt as though I had entered her world, a realm that defied explanation. Was this the world she had lived in, the one where her song held the key to its mysteries?

The train continued its relentless journey, the rhythm of its wheels echoing the rhythm of my heart. I was now the guardian of her elusive presence, and I couldn't help but wonder if I had entered a realm of dreams or if the enigmatic girl had drawn me into her own ethereal world.

The secret she held, the song she sang, and the riddle of her existence were now mine to unravel as I gazed out at the ever-changing landscape that whisked me further and further away from the world I had once known.

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Sergio Rijo

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