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Under the Grass

It's a magical land beneath our feet!

By AGBPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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Jamie, a little boy who loves to play with bugs.

He runs to the yard towards his favorite spot at the edge of the grass.

He patiently waits for his friend the ant.

Out from the jungle the ant appears, touching Jamie and shrinking him.

They both run and play hide and seek between the tall grass.

Racing up a dandelion, they fly on its seed.

Floating they see the butterflies dancing,

their magic wings sprinkling dust on the flowers.

They land on a wildflower, sunbathing and observing the clouds.

At evening Jamie goes back home, until next time ant.

MicrofictionShort StoryFantasyAdventure
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About the Creator

AGB

Traveling geologist, outdoor enthusiast and adventure seeker.

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  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    What a charming story of the joys of youth :) Loved it!! Congratulations on Top Story.

  • Komal12 months ago

    Good job with writing!

  • Mariann Carroll12 months ago

    Congratulations, the joy of childhood

  • Stephanie Downard12 months ago

    Loved this! Adorable ❤️Great Job! Congrats on your top story! 🎉🎉

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Well done!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!💖💖💕

  • Caroline Jane12 months ago

    Awww. Adorable!!

  • Lamar Wiggins12 months ago

    What a cute, feel-good story. Congrats on your T S.

  • Nice 🎉💖Congratulations on your Top Story✨🎉🎉🎉

  • Melissa Ingoldsby12 months ago

    Top story 🤩❤️Congrats 🎉

  • Melissa Ingoldsby12 months ago

    Awwwwwww🥰🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺🥺😁😁😁 this was so cute 🥰

  • Gerald Holmes12 months ago

    Loved this. You have a great imagination. Congrats on the Top Story and you have a new subscriber.

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Very nicely done. Congrats on the TS

  • Dana Crandell12 months ago

    A fun little fantasy! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Kristen Balyeat12 months ago

    Beautiful little tale- full of wonder and imagination! Congrats on top story!

  • This is amazing!

  • So clever and sweet. I've subscribed and look forward to more

  • This was so well done hearted and subscribed look forward to reading more

  • Gina C.12 months ago

    This was charming! Really loved this :)

  • Whoaaa, that's so cool being able to shrink when touched by an ant! I so wanna be Jamie!

  • Donna Renee12 months ago

    What a cute adventure!

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