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The Train to Kuranda

Inspired by a photo taken by Angie the Archivist and the Djabugay legend of Buda-dji

By Rachel Hannah FendrichPublished 4 months ago 3 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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It was time to emerge from the belly of Buda-dji.

He had come to Buda-dji from a burning land, where nothing but flame, scorched earth, and charred brush lingered. The dry air had choked on smoke and haze. Ash had rained down from the heavens, dusting the burnt remains that littered the ground with a cinereous burial shroud.

A stranger with tired eyes and blistering palms had rescued him from this place, pulled him from the fire with his bare hands. The stranger had embraced him, fed him, tended to his burns. The stranger had brought him to Buda-dji.

He had thought Buda-dji to be dead, butchered by Men who coveted the Carpet Snake’s precious Nautilus shells. Yet Buda-dji had materialized in front of him, his bright crimson and amber scales cutting through the ashy mist. Buda-dji was alive. This was not the Buda-dji from the Dreamtime; this Buda-dji was mechanical, with wheels and gears and erupting steam. But it was the Carpet Snake, nonetheless.

He had stood on a platform with the stranger. There had been other travelers with bloodshot eyes and grim faces, but there were none like him. A voice without a body had spoken a language that seemed vaguely familiar, but he had been unable to understand what was being said. Buda-dji had clanged and screeched as he gradually slowed and then stopped. With a hiss, the Carpet Snake’s mouth had gaped open haltingly. The stranger had led him past the jowls and down the throat. Buda-dji’s jaw had jolted closed behind them.

The air inside the Carpet Snake’s belly had been pure and clean, his insides made of glossy oak and velvet. Each segment of body wall was a looking glass to the ruins they had just escaped. They settled in as Buda-dji began the trek.

Buda-dji had slithered alongside the river, snaking his way upstream. Nestled into a corner of Buda-dji's polished intestines, he had spent the excursion watching the outer world pass them by. As they traveled, the desolate wasteland had subtly morphed into a blossoming ecosystem. First, speckles of green had started to sparkle among the charcoal. Then there had been sprouts beginning their climb out of the ground, their emerald colors juxtaposed with the dismal gray background. The further they had journeyed, the more flora appeared—stems, flowers, bushes, and trees. Just as he had in the Dreamtime, Buda-dji had carved out a new world.

After a time, Buda-dji had once again come to a stop. It was time to leave the safety of Buda-dji's affection. The stranger cradled him in his arms, and together they exited Buda-dji's mouth in the same manner they had entered it. In the new land that they had arrived in, the forest was overpowered by cement, metal, and terracotta roofs. The comfort and tranquility he had felt in Buda-dji's embrace was quickly replaced with worry and panic.

The stranger, perhaps sensing his emotional change, tightened his grip around him. “Alright, mate,” he said. It was neither a statement nor a question. It simply was. It gave him comfort.

They walked. And walked. And walked. The granite and the awnings disappeared, and the forest grew thick and wild around them. Familiar sounds began to echo through the air—birds singing, leaves rustling in the wind, water babbling through the streams.

Suddenly, he found himself placed on the cool, moist soil. He tried to return to the comfort of the stranger’s grasp but was turned away. In alarm, he whirled about in search of another source of safety. That’s when he heard it.

It was a bellow—deep, grunting, reverberating through the forest. Another soon followed it. As he strained to listen, the stench of familiar pheromones tingled his nostrils. He looked up into the trees and saw smatterings of gray fluff hidden among the leaves.

Koalas. There were others of his kind here. He had not seen any other koalas since the fire. With Buda-dji's help, the stranger had brought him to a new home. He turned to the stranger, wanting to portray some message of gratitude, but the stranger was already gone. He knew they would never meet again. So he turned back to the forest, back to his new home, and ventured into the new world Buda-dji had created for him.

It was time to start anew.

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Rachel Hannah Fendrich

Veterinary technician, godmother, cat mom, and world traveler.

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  • Leslie Writes3 months ago

    What a beautiful story with such rich details. 💕 I’m so glad for the little koala.

  • Anna 3 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • Test4 months ago

    Amazing job! Keep up the outstanding work—congrats!

  • Yay... finally, the credit that this amazing story deserves!!! Top Story! Yippee! Can't wait for your next masterpiece!

  • Adeshinajohn4 months ago

    Good one

  • Sahib ali4 months ago

    I like writing on Vocal. My audience tells me how good I am and I believe them not Vocal. Some excellent points here.

  • This is an excellent story, loved the ending and glad to see Vocal taking notice of recommendations

  • Grrr… my comments disappeared! This is a superb tale… wonderfully connected to the photo & it’s local area & legends… such a well deserved placing in Mackenzie’s challenge… well done!🤩❤️

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    How did I miss this, I love it! I though it was a wombat till the end! This is brilliant, truly.

  • What a beautifully mythic way of telling the story of a rescue. Though I understand a koala's claws can be terribly injurious. The rescuer must have been quite experienced.

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    Oh that ending is so cool! So unexpected. Stories in the pov of an animal can be so varied and not consistently compelling, but this is written so well! Fantastic use of the carpet snake story. I looked it up and you included so many aspects, yet made it new with the koala's narration. Queensland seems so mystical and rich after knowing this myth! Ugh, it's so good! Really really great story, Rachel. I can absolutely understand why you were so angry when Vocal accidentally deleted it. No one should miss this one. ❤️

  • Wow! This is so well tied into the photo… linking the local snake legend to a koala rescued & relocated safely (clever plot twist)! Thanks for your imaginative interpretation of the photo!

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