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The Mantra

A Short Story

By Mollie NarutovicsPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
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The Mantra
Photo by Sina Katirachi on Unsplash

In the early morning of February 11th, a whisper is barely audible above the dull sound of a fog horn. A monk sits, quietly tracing spirals with his finger in the piles of ground glass in front of him. The mantra he chants would leave anyone else tongue-tied, but he recites it with such melody that it sounds like a song. In his other hand, he holds an obelisk, that begins to glow after the tenth recitation of the mantra.

The brighter the glow, the more plaintive his eyes become. He knows the consequences of this mantra, and despite his warnings, the high priest overruled him.

"You are but a saprophyte, and will do as I command." The high priest had gaffed.

The light of the glow becomes so bright, it is as though the sun is rising. As it did, the monk started convulsing. Becoming more and more violent, the monk shook with such force that the ground opened up. The disesteemed monk was swallowed into the centre of the glow; knowing that his fate was a blissful haven compared to the chaos that is to come.

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About the Creator

Mollie Narutovics

Creativity can blossom from the wildest of places, and has no limitations. Stories are all around us waiting to be told; I hope to someday bring mine to life and share it.

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  • Kendall Defoe 4 months ago

    Yikes! Had to look it up...and get even more terrified by what chaos there is to come...

  • Mattie :)4 months ago

    Hello Mollie. Cool story. Have a great day :)

  • Test4 months ago

    Remarkable job! Maintain the fantastic work—congrats!

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    I love the description ground glass. I hope it means sand and not something more literal.

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Crikey, it started so calmly.....

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