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The Love Ballad of Beatrice and Bartholomew

Nestled deep within a valley kissed by the sun

By Moharif YuliantoPublished 8 days ago 3 min read
The Love Ballad of Beatrice and Bartholomew
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Nestled deep within a valley kissed by the sun, lived Beatrice, a woman with a spirit as bright as the sunflowers that adorned her cottage. Her days were filled with the earthy scent of blooming lavender and the gentle rhythm of tending to her beloved donkeys. There was Barnaby, the wise elder with eyes that held stories of countless sunrises, and Clementine, the spirited younger one, forever eager for an adventure.

Beatrice wasn't looking for love. In fact, she thrived on the quiet companionship of her animals. They understood her unspoken worries, shared her laughter as she worked the land, and offered a comforting presence on lonely evenings. However, love, as they say, has a way of finding you even in the most unexpected places.

One crisp autumn morning, as Beatrice led Clementine to the meadow for a morning graze, a commotion startled them. A figure, silhouetted against the rising sun, was entangled with a bramble patch. Rushing closer, Beatrice discovered a man with hair the color of burnished wheat, struggling to free himself. He introduced himself as Bartholomew, a traveling tinker on his way to the village fair.

Bartholomew's smile was as warm as the autumn sun, and his eyes, a deep hazel, held a twinkle of amusement. Beatrice, normally reserved, found herself captivated. They worked together to untangle him, Clementine watching with curious snorts. Bartholomew, with a playful bow, thanked Beatrice for her rescue.

As they walked towards the village, Beatrice learned more about Bartholomew's life on the road. He repaired pots and pans, mended broken toys, and possessed a seemingly magical ability to breathe new life into discarded objects. His stories were as captivating as the trinkets he carried, each word painting vivid pictures in Beatrice's mind.

He, in turn, was drawn to Beatrice's quiet strength and her deep connection with her donkeys. He found her laugh, like the tinkling of wind chimes, a melody that soothed his restless soul. As they reached the village square, a tug-of-war was underway, pitting the young men against the older ones. Bartholomew, ever the showman, challenged the winner to a test of skill.

He instructed Beatrice to hold a carrot high, Clementine standing beside her. Then, with a whistle and a snap of his fingers, Barnaby, who had followed them to the square, trotted towards the carrot. However, instead of snatching it, Barnaby gently nudged Clementine forward. Clementine, with a playful push, sent the carrot rolling towards the children watching at the sidelines.

Laughter erupted throughout the square. The challenge was abandoned, replaced by a sense of camaraderie. Bartholomew, grinning, bowed to Beatrice, his eyes sparkling with admiration. That night, beneath a sky ablaze with stars, they shared stories by the warmth of Beatrice's fire.

Days turned into weeks, and Bartholomew found himself drawn back to the valley more often than his repairs dictated. He'd offer to mend anything broken around Beatrice's cottage, his true purpose to simply be near her. He learned to appreciate the rhythm of her life, the gentle care she showered on her donkeys, and the quiet joy she found in simple things.

One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in fiery hues, Bartholomew sat with Beatrice in the meadow. Clementine nuzzled his hand, and Barnaby stood patiently nearby. Taking a deep breath, Bartholomew confessed his feelings. He spoke of her gentle spirit, her deep connection with the land, and the way her presence filled the world with a light he'd never known before.

Beatrice, her cheeks flushed, admitted that his presence had brought laughter and a sense of adventure back into her life. Bartholomew reached into his pack and pulled out a necklace, a silver donkey charm delicately crafted. He explained how he'd found it at the village fair, instantly reminded of Beatrice. He clasped the necklace around her neck, their eyes meeting in a silent understanding.

Life didn't change dramatically for Beatrice and Bartholomew. The sun still rose over the valley, bathing the meadows in golden light. However, now, they watched it together, their laughter echoing through the quiet mornings. The donkeys became silent witnesses to their love, Clementine often sporting a playful flower crown woven by Bartholomew, and Barnaby enjoying the extra scratches behind his long ears.

Their love story wasn't one of grand gestures or passionate declarations. It bloomed quietly, nurtured by shared moments, mutual respect, and a love for the simple things in life. They learned from one another – Beatrice finding joy in Bartholomew's adventurous spirit, and Bartholomew discovering the beauty of a life rooted in the land. Their love was as strong and dependable as Barnaby, as playful and spirited as Clementine.

One day, a storm raged through the valley, the wind howling like a banshee.

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Moharif Yulianto

a freelance writer and thesis preparation in his country, youtube content creator, facebook

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