The Guardian
A Gargoyle Microfiction
Day and night, I watch over the cathedral. I peek beyond the edge of its wall and stare down at the congregation as they enter and exit the cathedral’s double doors. Some cower in fear of me, some watch me in awe, but most ignore me, just another aspect of the cathedral’s architecture less significant than its mighty spires. If only they knew what I had done for this world…
I once protected mankind from demons—the likes of Beelzebub and Lucifer himself. But where did my loyalty get me? A permanent position frozen in stone atop this Gothic monument to fraudulent faith.
Every day, I see sin inside and outside the walls of this cathedral: thieves, abusers, rapists, murderers. Yet here I crouch, only witness to these crimes, unable to stop them. My blood boils as innocent lives are ruined.
But this won’t be my fate for long.
I can hear her calling for me. With each cry for my help, I can feel my joints loosen. With each ingredient she drops into the potion, another stony fleck falls from my body. With each word of her chant, I am closer and closer to it—true freedom.
I am reborn.
I am vengeance.
About the Creator
Stephanie Hoogstad
With a BA in English and MSc in Creative Writing, writing is my life. I have edited and ghost written for years with some published stories and poems of my own.
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Comments (19)
Solid. An absolute gem , I love the ending and am waiting for a sequel. You added emotion to a stone sculpture that I am rooting for his freedom.
Stephanie!!! This is incredible!! It was inspiring and moody and just gave me all the creative vibes!! I love the narrative and where you went with this, simply a gorgeous piece!! I'd say my favourite from you so far!! Congrats on Top Story!! Please tell me this is in a challenge somewhere because I want to see it win and get more recognition!
Great first paragraph. Would love to read more. Definitely peaked interest.
Very nice work and really brings out the purpose of the guardian.
it is one of the interesting keep it up stephanie
IT is one of the epic story
congratulations on your top story
Wow! This was so good. Great details with a tone that created an ominous sense of dread. I believe vengeance is justifiable. And I'll probably never look at a gargoyle the same again. Well done!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Wow!
Bloody awesome! So much said in so few words. Bizzarely, I've pondered a gargoyle or two in my time. Beautifully written 🤍
Congrats on Top Story!!
Splendid work! Keep the momentum—congrats!
Wow. I thought this was epic.
Ooh, this gets the heart beating, doesn't it.
Oooo, this was soooo exciting! I want him to come to life and stomp the life out of those sinners!!!
Somebody's gonna get it 😱😁
agree with Kendall
Creepy as hell...and I want to know more!