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The Forgotten City of Eldrida

A short story

By KelPublished about a year ago 6 min read
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The Forgotten City of Eldrida
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The sun was beginning to dip below the horizon, casting a warm golden light over the remote mountain range. The group of explorers had been trekking through the rugged terrain for days, and they were beginning to lose hope of ever finding the lost city of Eldrida. But as they crested a hill, they saw the ruins stretching out before them, a testament to the once-great city that had been lost to time.

The group consisted of five adventurers, each with their own skills and areas of expertise. Leading the group was Aric, a seasoned explorer who had spent his entire life searching for lost cities and treasures. Eldrida was the crown jewel of his career, and he had brought along four others to aid him in his search.

As they approached the ruins, the explorers were struck by the grandeur of Eldrida. The city's architecture was unlike anything they had ever seen, with grand arches, towering pillars, and crumbling walls. But as they stepped through the ruins, they couldn't shake the feeling that something was amiss.

Strange whispers and eerie shadows seemed to follow their every step, as if the spirits of the past were warning them to turn back. Aric tried to reassure his companions, but even he couldn't shake the feeling that they were not alone in the ruins.

As they ventured deeper into the heart of Eldrida, they found themselves in a large courtyard. The courtyard was surrounded by towering statues of ancient gods and goddesses, their stone faces weathered by time. The ground was covered in overgrown vines and wildflowers, and the sound of trickling water echoed through the ruins.

In the center of the courtyard, a small stone pedestal caught the attention of one of the explorers, a young man named Kai. "Look!" he exclaimed, pointing towards the pedestal. "There's something there!"

The other explorers rushed over to investigate, and as they approached the pedestal, Aric couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. He could feel the eyes of the spirits of Eldrida upon him, and the feeling was almost overwhelming.

On the pedestal lay a small, ornate box, covered in intricate carvings and glittering gems. Aric's heart raced with excitement. Could this be the treasure he had been searching for all his life?

Despite his unease, Aric reached out to open the box. As he did, a blinding light filled the courtyard, causing the other explorers to shield their eyes. The light dissipated, revealing a small, ornate pendant lying within the box. The pendant was made of a shimmering blue crystal, and it seemed to glow with an otherworldly light.

Aric picked up the pendant and examined it closely. It was unlike anything he had ever seen before, with a strange energy that pulsed through it. He knew that this pendant was important, but he didn't know why.

Suddenly, a voice echoed through the ruins, causing the explorers to jump in surprise. "Who are you?" the voice asked, with a hint of anger and suspicion.

Aric stepped forward, holding the pendant in his hand. "We are travelers," he said, trying to keep his voice steady. "We mean no harm. We are simply exploring these ruins."

The voice didn't answer for a few moments, and the explorers held their breath, unsure of what was going to happen next. But then, the voice spoke again, with a hint of curiosity this time.

"Why do you carry that pendant?" the voice asked.

Aric hesitated, unsure of how to answer. He didn't know who or what was speaking to them, but he knew that they needed to be careful.

"It was in the box,"

As the explorers stood in the courtyard, the voice continued to speak. "That pendant is cursed," it said. "It brings nothing but destruction to those who possess it."

Aric's heart sank at the words, but he couldn't bring himself to let go of the pendant. He had come too far and overcome too many obstacles to just give up now.

"We don't believe in curses," Aric said, trying to sound confident. "We're here to explore the ruins, and we won't be deterred by superstition."

The voice let out a low chuckle. "You are fools to ignore the warnings of the past," it said. "But if you insist on keeping the pendant, you will face the consequences."

With those words, the voice fell silent, leaving the explorers standing in the courtyard, feeling a sense of unease. Aric knew that they needed to be cautious, but he also knew that they couldn't just abandon the pendant. They needed to find out more about it and the city of Eldrida.

As they continued exploring the ruins, they found that the city was full of secrets and mysteries. Strange symbols adorned the walls, and hidden passages led to unknown depths. But the explorers were determined to uncover the truth about Eldrida, no matter the cost.

Days turned into weeks, and the group found themselves becoming more and more obsessed with the city. They couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched, and strange things started happening around them. Supplies went missing, and strange noises echoed through the ruins at night.

But still, Aric and his companions pushed on, driven by a hunger for knowledge and treasure. They spent hours poring over ancient texts and studying the symbols on the walls, hoping to unlock the secrets of Eldrida.

But as time went on, they began to realize that something was not right. The city seemed to be alive with a malevolent energy, and the explorers felt as though they were being consumed by it. They started having nightmares, plagued by visions of the past and the future.

And then, one night, it happened. The ground shook beneath their feet, and the ruins began to crumble around them. The explorers ran for their lives, but they could feel the curse of Eldrida pulling them back. It was as if the city itself didn't want them to leave.

In the chaos, Aric lost his grip on the pendant, and it fell from his hand, shattering into a million pieces. As it did, a wave of energy washed over the ruins, and the explorers felt as though they were being cleansed.

They stumbled out of the ruins, battered and bruised, but alive. As they looked back at the city of Eldrida, they knew that they would never forget the lessons they had learned there. The city was a reminder of the dangers of obsession and the power of the past.

From that day on, the explorers went their separate ways, carrying with them the memories of their time in Eldrida. And though they never spoke of it again, they knew that they had been forever changed by the forgotten city of magic and mystery.

Short StoryMysteryHistoricalFable
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  • Test3 months ago

    Super!!! Excellent story!!!

  • online writerabout a year ago

    Great 👍

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