Fiction logo

The Eerie of Room 401 (part 1)

The Getaway

By AshokPublished 2 months ago 7 min read
 The Eerie of Room 401 (part 1)
Photo by Sonya Romanovska on Unsplash

Caption 1: The Appearance

In the core of Orrisa, settled inside the old walls of an old lodging, lay Room 401. The lodging, when a fantastic foundation, presently remained as a remnant of its previous brilliance, with stripping paint and squeaking sections of flooring telling stories of its for some time failed to remember past. Saida, a daring explorer, showed up at the inn looking for cover for the evening. Much to her dismay, Room 401 held insider facts hazier than the actual night.

As Saida looked into the inn, she was unable to shake off the sensation of disquiet that washed over her. Overlooking her impulses, she acknowledged the way to Room 401 from the tired secretary and advanced down the faintly lit passage.

Caption 2: The Murmurs

That evening, as Saida lay in bed attempting to rest, she heard faint murmurs reverberating through the room. From the outset, she excused them as the breeze pulling pranks at the forefront of her thoughts. Be that as it may, the murmurs persevered, becoming stronger as time passed until they turned into a relentless ensemble of voices.

Unnerved, Saida looked through the room, however there was nobody there. She attempted to justify the sounds, faulting her creative mind for conjuring up the scary voices. Yet, where it counts, she realized there was something vile hiding in the shadows of Room 401.

Caption 3: The Uncovering

Unfit to persevere through one more second in the spooky room, Saida made plans to uncover the reality behind its malignant presence. She dove into the historical backdrop of the lodging, scouring old papers and documents for any notice of Room 401.

What she found creeped her out. Quite a while back, Room 401 had been the site of a frightful homicide. A visitor had been fiercely killed inside its walls, their soul everlastingly caught inside its limits.

Not entirely settled to stop the eerie, Saida looked for the assistance of a neighborhood clairvoyant. Together, they played out a séance, wanting to speak with the fretful soul and proposition its harmony.

As the séance started, the room developed a frosty cold, and a presence spread the word. Through the clairvoyant, the soul talked, relating the repulsions that had occurred for it throughout everyday life. It argued for discharge from its timeless torture, asking for absolution and reclamation.

Moved by the soul's situation, Saida promised to assist it with discovering a sense of reconciliation. With the clairvoyant's direction, she played out a purging custom, sanitizing Room 401 of its dim energy and permitting the soul to at last continue on.

Caption 4: The Departure

With the soul's takeoff, Room 401 was at long last liberated from its spooky past. Saida, assuaged that her experience was finished, gathered her packs, and was ready to abandon the lodging.

In any case, as she ventured out into the passageway, she was unable to shake the sensation of being watched. Looking back at Room 401, she saw a gleam of development in the shadows — a waiting remainder of the dimness that had once consumed it.

However Saida had gotten away from the grasp of Room 401, and she realized that its eerie would everlastingly torment her fantasies, a sign of the revulsions that prowled in the most obscure corners of the world.

As she left the inn, she promised never to return, in case the spirits of the past ascent again to guarantee their next casualty. Furthermore, however, she would attempt to neglect, the memory of Room 401 would perpetually be carved into her brain as a chilling indication of the night she considered standing up to the unexplored world.

By Eric Marty on Unsplash

Caption 5: The Return

Despite her promise to always avoid the lodging, Saida ended up tormented by recollections of Room 401. Bad dreams tormented her rest, everyone more clear and alarming than the last. She was unable to shake the inclination that something had followed her home from Orrisa, a malicious presence sneaking just past the edge of her cognizance.

Frantic for replies, Saida set out on an excursion back to, still up in the air to uncover the reality behind the eerie of Room 401 for the last time. As she moved toward the haggard structure, a feeling of fear washed over her, yet she proceeded, preparing herself for whatever lay ahead.

Caption 6: The Disclosure

After getting back to the lodging, Saida dove further into its set of experiences, uncovering long-covered privileged insights that shed light on the real essence of Room 401. She learned of a dim custom performed by a clique that once occupied the region, looking to bring unspeakable revulsions from past the cloak of the real world.

Room 401 had been the focal point of their bent functions, filling in as an entryway between the universe of the living and the domain of the dead. The spirits of those forfeited in the custom waited inside its walls, their fretful spirits bound to the inn forever.

Outfitted with this information, Saida understood what she needed to do. Yet again she wandered into Room 401, overcoming its vile profundities looking for the wellspring of the frightful. As she investigated the room, she felt a noxious presence keeping a close eye on her, its cold touch creeping her out.

Caption 7: The Showdown

In the core of Room 401, Saida encountered the encapsulation of the dimness that had consumed it. A shadowy figure rose out of the profundities of the room, its structure moving and turning with unnatural effortlessness. It addressed her in murmurs, promising power beyond anything she could ever imagine if, by some stroke of good luck, she would submit to its will.

In any case, Saida wouldn't be influenced by its allurements. With mental fortitude brought into the world of distress, she went up against the element head-on, diverting the strength of every one of the people who had succumbed to its malignancy. In a climactic skirmish of wills, Saida battled to oust the murkiness from Room 401 for the last time.

Caption 8: The Expulsion

As the fight seethed on, Saida called upon antiquated ceremonies that went down through ages, conjuring the force of light to drive out the murkiness that had flourished in the room. With every spell, the shadows retreated, debilitating the grasp of the element that prowled inside.

Finally, with a last explosion of energy, Saida released a rush of unadulterated light, decontaminating Room 401 of its reviled pollution. The substance let out a chilling shout as it was ousted back to the profundities from whence it came, its hang on the lodging broken until the end of time.

Caption 9: The Result

With the haziness vanquished, Room 401 stood quiet and void again. Saida arose out of the trial battered yet triumphant, her determination unshaken by the detestations she had seen. As she abandoned the inn for the last time, she realized that her process was nowhere near finished.

The memory of Room 401 would perpetually torment her, a sign of the delicacy of the human soul notwithstanding unspeakable malevolence. Yet, Saida wouldn't allow dread to run her life, promising to confront any challenges that lay ahead with boldness and assurance.

Furthermore, however, the shadows of Room 401 waited for her, she left the lodging with her head held high, prepared to stand up to anything haziness the future could hold. For Saida, the genuine awfulness was not in the phantoms that spooky the lobbies of the old lodging, but in the strength of the human soul to beat them.

Part 2 Coming Soon

thrillerStream of ConsciousnessShort StorySeriesSatirePsychologicalMicrofictionLoveHumorHorrorFantasyFan FictionFableAdventure

About the Creator


Hi, I'm Ashok, and I'm from India. I'm really good at art and digital marketing, and I've been doing it for six years. Nice to meet you all!

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights


There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.