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The Bag - Revelation

A Story Every Day in 2024 June 15th 167/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 9 days ago Updated 9 days ago 2 min read
The Bag - Revelation
Photo by Matteo Kutufa on Unsplash

This microfiction is part of a series. If you would like to read it from the start, please visit The Bag - The Chapters where you can start from the very beginning should you so choose.

The last episode link is here if you missed it: The Bag - Caught!

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Ella knew straightaway that something was different. She was fully back in the chair, shackled. Her mind was still fragmented with the Disruption but something was altered.

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The Master grasped Jason's shoulder but there was nothing there. The shape of him was contained in his clothes but there was no substance, no flesh. What strangeness was this?

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Moments before the Master arrived, Jason looked hard at the photo on the phone. Bright green eyes...bright green eyes....there was something there...and it hit him, an epiphany like no other! Fuck! Ella was Catwoman! How could he have not seen it before?

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Ella flexed her fingers.

Light.

Previously, on fully returning to the chair, she had felt stiff, encumbered, like her life was lead, her energy used in transmitting herself outwards, playing the Game. It was all a show, designed to provide hope where there was none, designed to suggest that with her powers she could just gain freedom but she knew it was a test. A test that would entertain until it ended.

She had never felt like this on a return.

Her heart began to beat faster and her blood rushed with a sensation that she had long since considered departed: optimism.

Her mind scrambled.

What were the possible scenarios?

1. Something had happened to the Disruptors. Maybe.

2. Something had happened to Him? No. Too soon.

3. Malcolm?

4. Jason. Something had happened with Jason.

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The Master did not know what to do. There was no "other" to capture. There were his things and there were his clothes but no person. And yet, he had seen him, animated, as a real person, on surveillance, at the station. Was this a trick? A product of Ella's evolution?

The cold hand of dread inched its way steadily over his brow to release small rivulets of sweat into the lines of anxiety that each day deepened in direct correlation with the pressure of the situation in which he found himself.

How would he explain this to Him?

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Following the drone footage, He already knew. And he was livid.

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Ella heard the fracas.

Behind the glass.

And then something else.

A timid voice:

"Catwoman?"

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366 words

So, the moment has finally come where Ella and Jason can communicate. Where do we go next?

Thanks for stopping by! If you do read this, please do leave a comment as I love to interact with my readers.

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Comments (10)

  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶5 days ago

    Rats!🥺 I somehow fell behind in your story 😵‍💫… just as well I can catch up quickly ✅. Such exciting developments… so sweet… ‘A timid voice: "Catwoman?"😃

  • "The cold hand of dread inched its way steadily over his brow to release small rivulets of sweat into the lines of anxiety that each day deepened in direct correlation with the pressure of the situation in which he found himself." This, I believe, is the natural progression from "I was just following orders". Historical scenarios abound! Well-wrought!

  • Caroline Craven8 days ago

    Yay! Glad Jason remembered! Finally! Let’s go!!

  • Like finallyyyyyy!! Gosh I had goosebumps when Jason said "Catwoman?"! Ahhhh, I can't wait to know what happens next. I think either Jason or Ella's POV next would be nice

  • John Cox8 days ago

    Mark is spot on! I just want more of whatever that was! Bring it, Rachel!

  • Mark Gagnon8 days ago

    I think next may be discovering how much power and control they have when working together. The discovery was epic!

  • Hannah Moore8 days ago

    I was questioning whether Jason had ever been real for a moment.

  • D.K. Shepard8 days ago

    Woah! Did not expect that! Great twist in this, Rachel! And glad Jason had a breakthrough!

  • Lana V Lynx8 days ago

    I hope Jason and Ella come up with a plan to get themselves out of His reach. Meanwhile, what’s happening to Mummy?

  • Jason and Ella together look like a force to be reckoned with. I guess we will see some action now!

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