Mirage
For Teresa Renton's "Safe Place" Twitter flash Challenge
By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 7 months ago • 1 min read
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Introduction
This is for Teresa Renton's "Safe Place" Twitter flash Challenge which you can read about here;
The challenge is:
Write a 249 character short Twitter/X length flash. Title doesn’t count.
Prompt: OASIS vs BLUR.
This is mine
The music is "Mirage" by Santana from the album "Borboletta"
Mirage
Walking across burning desert sands, water needed, throat feeling like sandpaper, feel like there’s not long left, eyes blurring. Then an Oasis! Could this be salvation? Falling gratefully into the cool water, but it’s just hot sand. Another Mirage
Comments (7)
This was tragic! A difficult challenge but you nailed it brilliantly!
This is wonderfully done! So much of a story behind so few words! An exceptional 'Tweet' of 'X' !🤍
That's fabulous, hints at a story beneath the story. Thanks for joining in :)
Well done.
Wonderful!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
Nicely done.
Great song! ❤️