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Loud Mike

Let's just get to where we're going.

By Elan VissPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Mike's driving down the two-lane highway when the transmission on his '88 camry locks up. He skids on asphalt, then on dirt, then into tall weeds growing in my rural half-acre yard. He needs help, and it's the kind of help that maybe I can give. No phone, no tools, no friends. He asks for a ride to his motor home by the lake, 30 minutes away. He tells me about his life, wife, kid. The kid died. The wife left. He loves her still, but she couldn't stay faithful through the hurt. He talks loudly about the painful parts.

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Elan Viss

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