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This is for the Microfiction Magic Challenge. You can read about it in The Link. The Prompt: Write a micro-fiction story in just 50 to 100 words
By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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A Nightcafe Creation By The Author
You said you would be fine walking home.
I said I would walk you home, I was concerned for your safety.
You said you didn't want to inconvenience me, my inconvenience was more important to you than your own safety.
You left and I started to feel sick.
I was so worried for you.
I knew you would not make it home.
I AM THE ONE I WARNED YOU OF
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Comments (8)
Ouch! That ending. Well done.
Yes! This was so good and had a great twist! I loved it!
So, either way....
Creepy and scary nicely written 😳
Oooo, this made me grin! I loved this!
Nice twist.
Ohhh 😮 that’s a tricky one ☝️ good one brother ♥️
The Dark knight , scary