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Inference

History by Text Message - what could go wrong?

By Dana StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Inference
Photo by Becca Schultz on Unsplash

The ping echoed in the darkness. The man rolled over, pawing for his mobile on the nightstand.

‘Come to Dallas. Shoot Oswald. Big $’

Past due rent. Bare refrigerator. He sighed, got dressed. He stuffed what he needed in the backpack, leaving the Nikon on the dining room table.

History, misunderstood.

Microfiction
19

About the Creator

Dana Stewart

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  • Olivia Martinez10 months ago

    Very nice, read mine too https://vocal.media/fiction/inter-miami-g71ac0fen

  • Sandra Tena Cole11 months ago

    Oh this is brilliant! Microfiction mastery right here ❣️

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    Not sure how I missed this. Thanks to Rick for linking it on Vocal+ I found it. Very creative and huge props on the miniscule word count!!! Loved the awesome, jolting twist!

  • Wow!!! this is powerful. That's all I can say. I am left with my mouth open!!! Excellent work!!!

  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    Oh damn! That was so freaking good. What a creative take on this challenge. Loved it :)

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Wow, that was just...intense. Well done, Ms. Stewart!

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    LOL! Loved this twist at the end!

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Whoa! Phenomenal piece!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wow!! Such a brilliant idea...only 72 words, maybe? This is so impressive! 😍 Love this :)

  • Lol, wrong 'shoot' buddy! This was so brilliant!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    ooooh I love this!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Very clever, and in so few words!

  • Phil Flanneryabout a year ago

    Hmm.

  • I love the Twist😉❤️❗

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fabulous!!! Left some love!!!

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Now that's an interesting way to manufacture a twist. Clever, Dana!

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