Effortless
A flashku for the Microfiction Magic Challenge
“I like how the light hits the patches of grass there,” Maggie whispered in her usual laboured voice.
“This spring has been gorgeous,” Alex retorted with a smile.
“Yes. Nature speaks beautifully...” With a trembling finger, Maggie pointed to the slope behind the wall. At its top, a solitary path winded its way towards the horizon.
A sound came out of her mouth, followed by a second and third ones.
Alex remembered instantly. Sunday mornings in bed… Effortless walks… Lively pizza nights…
The resilience in Maggie’s wordless incantation made everything else insignificant. Happiness had never left.
©2021 Cendrine Marrouat
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Effortless is a flashku inspired by Emily Dickinson’s A Light exists in Spring.
A Flashku, which I created in 2021, is a short piece of flash fiction that borrows from the Sixku, Kindku, and Haiku.
Rules:
- 50-100 words
- 7 words must be taken from another piece (credits mandatory)
- Inspired by an image (permission and credits mandatory)
- Minimal descriptions
- Climax at about 80% through the piece (not a hard rule, just a way to guide your writing)
- Positive / inspirational twist or resolution at the end
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That's it for today! Thank you for reading!
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Cendrine Marrouat is a writer, photographer, podcaster, blogger, anthology editor, and the co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms and A Warm Cup of Cozy. She has authored and co-authored more than 40 books, including The Train: A Short Story (2023), In Her Own Words: A Collection of Short Stories & Flashku (2022), After the Fires of Day: Haiku Inspired by Kahlil Gibran & Alphonse de Lamartine (2021), Rhythm Flourishing: A Collection of Kindku and Sixku (2020), Walks: A Collection of Haiku (2019-2020), and In the Silence of Words: A Three-Act Play (2018).
Cendrine's work has appeared in many publications. She is the creator of the Sixku, Flashku, Sepigram, and Reminigram; as well as the co-creator of the Kindku, Pareiku, Vardhaku, and Hemingku.
About the Creator
Cendrine Marrouat
Writer & Author⎜Photographer⎜Artist⎜Co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms / A Warm Mug of Cozy⎜(Co-)creator of literary forms
"The Train: A Short Story" is out!
Website: https://creativeramblings.com
Donations: https://ko-fi.com/cendrineartist
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Comments (19)
This was so amazing! Beautiful choice of words!
This is neat! 👏I’ve never heard of this style..also I love Emily Dickinson too. 😃
Great work! I loved the format and the explanation at the end. Very cool.
The Flashku... wow! 😊💕
Great Story ❤️😉📝😁❗
I absolutely loved this. Great work!
Beautifully written and a beautiful image, too!
Thank you so much Cendrine for writing and publishing this endearing piece. As someone nurtured by nature particularly when my soul is weary your words speak to me: ‘The resilience in Maggie’s wordless incantation made everything else insignificant. Happiness had never left.’ Beautiful cadence Pauline 🌸
Love it.
Nice, very nice 😊
This is exceptionally gorgeous; the wording, the message, and the ending! I'm in love. 😍 Sooo well done, Cendrine!
This is a beautiful piece of writing. :)
This is a truly beautiful piece deserving of a Top Story
Beautiful story. Great job.
Wow, I really enjoyed this. So many emotions...
Oh, this us beautifully done. Love lasts.
Brilliant!!!💖💖💕
Nicely done!
Oh that was lovely! ❤️