Coconuts and Me
On a tropical island far away from my former self
If you are anything like me, feeling the world's vibrations
At a much deeper level, feeling that things are
Not really what they seem to be, that something is amiss
Almost a sense of not really belonging... anywhere
I identify truly with this state of feeling alien sometimes, within
A life seemingly perfect in every way, except to me
As if there are two different persons, existing completely
In a different sphere, where the two have yet to meet<<<
Something meaningful needed to be done
So I went on a quest, a long trek to find and solidify
The two halves that needed to become as one
I eventually found her, and her me, that is how I
Have come to narrate this pathway to my redemption<<<
I gave my newfound me my old telephone number
I now use a brand new one, you see
Still she knows the old one, so
I keep it handy, just in case she needs me
Just in case she got lost again
And could not find her way back to me,
Her old self, the one with all the memories
Shoved deep, deep down where they are
Compressed but not forgotten!<<<
We started my story at the end
So let us begin again
From the beginning<<<
The whole entire me, the entire sum of my parts
Were missing, and existed someplace else
I needed to find the other pieces of my puzzle
So to become whole, unabridged and absolute
I have searched long and really hard
Through heartache, pain and loneliness
Lonely, though surrounded by many...many
Kind and well wishing souls, offering to help<<<
They did not understand, that only I
Could really find the scattered parts of me
Where were they? I wondered, it's been years
They should be here by now!
I have broken hearts, had my heart broken
Started again, broke the connections, continued
Along the path to finding a wholesome me<<<
The answer was a vacation in the sun
My old self agreed with my 'self' which was to be
We took ourselves off to the sunny Caribbean
Deck chairs, beached umbrellas and suntan bodies
Everywhere, soaking in the gifts of nature<<<
I sat under the smiling villainous and wicked sun
Lovely to bask in but ready to burn and scorch
I swam and walked, drank coconut water
And ate the gelatinous delicious meat inside the husk<<<
I sat back down, hidden in the shade from the yellow sun's
Inviting and beguiling offer of soulful nourishment, and
Promptly fell asleep. I quietly dreamed amidst the raucous
Symphony of fun loving, myriad voices of happiness and frivolity
Within this dream I saw myself, disconnected from myself
Reaching, reaching out to embrace and comfort me
The closer she got, the faster I ran, afraid to connect with me<<<
STOP! Shouted in such deep agony. I stood still, unable to move
Myself caught up with me. Embraced me, would not let go
We stood locked in perfect harmony and peace, absolute and divine
Our souls collided, my old self and my new consciousness
The two became as one. I was reborn beneath the healing sun
We shimmered into one complete and wholesome being
Without awaking, I felt free. Unencumbered and perfect!<<<
I finally opened my eyes. Everything seemed new!
I rose up from my slumber, tossed everything to the wind
And started to run..............
I ran until I collapsed on the sands...Laughing!
The person I had been running away from
My whole life, was really me, refusing to accept
Myself for who I really am!
I was, AM, a new person! REBORN!
Hello WORLD. Here I come!>>>
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