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Citrus

a covetous, fleeting love affair with April

By Erin SheaPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Finalist in 2023 Vocal Writing Awards - Flash Fiction
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Citrus
Photo by Vesela Vaclavik on Unsplash

We're both naked, unabashed, peeling citrus fruits.

The windows are open. We eat greedily with bare, curved spines. Stiff knees.

His remaining paper towels are put to use: a sachet for the peels and a half-hearted cover for the wet sheets. We giggle and point. True intimacy is almost childlike.

He tells me he's begun to believe in an afterlife of opportunity. Transformation.

I put my finger to his lips - a desperate deflection. I grab his bearded chin in protest.

"Don't say that. Don't make me think there's more. This is it. Promise me this is it!"

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About the Creator

Erin Shea

New Englander

Grad Student

Living with Lupus and POTS

Instagram: @somebookishrambles

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  • Harbor Benassa3 months ago

    I love how you've captured a single moment so beautifully. Great description!

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    “True intimacy is almost childlike.” Yes!! You captured that feeling here so well 💖

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