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Bullet Holes

Extra Holes

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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Bullet Holes
Photo by David Clode on Unsplash

(For Poppy's January Challege

at https://vocal.media/writers/poppy-s-prompts)

Bullet holes

Are extra,

Wholly holes —

Extra holes

Beyond which

Come standard –

Unnecessary, superfluous:

Neither hear

Nor speak

Nor see

Nor pee;

Don't love

Or interdigitate

Or lovingly

Consummate;

Or eliminate —

Just waste.

.

Make life

Leak out.

.

Unnecessary holes

Are extra

Ass holes.

We each

Only need

One.

The rest

Are just

Extra waste.

Stream of Consciousness
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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

[email protected]

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  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Wonderful piece. Nicely done.

  • Well done! "Don't love Or interdigitate Or lovingly Consummate; Or eliminate — Just waste." I'm learning all the time... had to check the definition of interdigitate!

  • This was so profound. Loved the last stanza the most!

  • Poppy 5 months ago

    You made the rhyming seem so effortless and smooth! A great take on the prompt. “We each Only need One.” Is my favourite part!

  • Daphsam5 months ago

    Well done!

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