Septagon Soltice
It wasn’t that long until Izzy appeared not in a dream or illusion, but on my cellular watch that came as a surprise. Doctor where are you? The familiar face of Izzy materialized in miniature upon her wrist. I’m not in my Icelandic home, as our hospital moon base called for my expertise. The tall man from the Pleiades image had the familiar picture waves as his hologram fluctuated. I wasn’t aware you had a moon base! I’ve never seen your base up close, may I have a look around? The Doctor quickly closed a sliding silicon partition. She was standing in an empty room allowing for a private meeting. Giving him the permission to teleport, Sir Izzy’s appertain slowly formed particle by particle. He stood about a foot higher than Dr Maine wearing a white robe & Powdered wig holding a golden Aspergillum. His holographic form leaned forward giving the Doctor a warm embrace. The Doctor feeling a bit stunned from someone transcending from a watch had a seat in a nearby chair. Another remarkable view! Sir Izzy stood looking out the window upon the smooth surface of the Moon. Swirls of a grey fog landscape among poc holes of craters made it look more like a painting while the orb of the Earth spun below. Oh heavens! I didn’t expect you so soon! She felt strangely dizzy sitting back in her oval chair. We of the seven star system have honored your request with now the possibility of curing all sick on your planet, if you so desire. You talked about having medical advances, as I ask if you could bring them here. I don’t think it’s necessary to travel all the way there.. We cannot bring the machines in our small crafts, our devices that even cure death are way to large! Izzy said placing his Aspergillum staff firmly on the floor. I see, she said looking at him in all seriousness. Let me explain further..Our planet is about to experience a major Astronomical phenomenon we call the Septagon Solstice. When this conjunction of suns moves into a seven dimensional eclipse of our Mother Sun, it creates a Spectacular transformation that occurs only every 500 years. This orb I hold is an example of what the event gives. Tapping the golden ball upon his gloved hand he produced a glowing stone that he placed in the Doctors hands. Oh my! I’m feeling so overwhelmed! Oh..Oh..Oh! Dr Maine felt everything she was inside rushing up outside as if she could feel the stars & the whole Universe. It lasted only a few seconds, while she became herself again. The pink stone glowed still within her hands. Smoothing her silver spun hair she exclaimed.. If this is what a seven planetary solstice creates, I would love to see it in person! Izzy smiled waving his orb producing not an object, but a replica of the Doctor. The replica blinked her eyes saying, Hallo! What is she for? She asked while staring at a perfect copy of herself. Izzy laughed explaining that she wouldn’t be missed as the replica would allow her to leave in time for the Septagon.. Of course, how do we get there? Our craft isn’t far, we can take a moon rover. I’ll just need to gather a few things..The two seemed to fly out the door as the Doctor took her medical bag along with the glow stone. Overhead the base floated a spinning wheel of the Orbital Hospital still under construction. The stars twinkled as the rover hovered over the moon’s surface. Once they found the hidden craft, the Doctor was surprised to see it wasn’t round. That’s the cigar craft we found years ago occupied by the ancient woman! It’s the same type of craft, the one you found did look extremely ancient. Was the girl inside one of your people? Our ancients were not developed such as her, yet her eyes seemed to tell of another world, You saw her? I have viewed the Apollo 18 report & think it could be hypothetical since the craft & women mysteriously disappeared. Stepping outside the unmanned rover, the door to the long craft opened. A familiar crew of astronauts wearing the insignia of their Star motioned them inside. One was a female that studied Dr Maine closely. She helped her to a seat while the craft flew into hyperspace. A plate of food & water was served as the Doctor found the food pleasant. I forgot to ask how long the flight will be..? Izzy sat on a spatial looking throne as his crew bowed to his requests. Izzy smiled then said, I hadn’t fully told you that I am their King. My Lord, Dr Maine graciously bowed her head in respect. The formula you gave us enabled us to cloak the ship into hyperspace where we will arrive in our Constellation, Taurus in 444 ly in approximately one of your Earth years.
Comments (16)
Congrats on Top Story!!
Beautifully written and evoked. I loved the sentiment but also your description of the landscape: One by one, the surrounding hills shrugged off the shadows to reveal clean white peaks and plateaus. And the image of the wind ruffling his hair like his dad's hand was a lovely touch.
Your world-building is exceptional and really special, even in this format. I could see this unfolding into a grand saga, but also find this bite-sized epic vignette to be exactly what it needs to be. I'm left imagining what's next, and that's the power of your storytelling. Great writing!
Powerful last line. Great work!
This is such a cool concept that blossomed into a really good read! I believe I loved everything about it and can easily see this go into a longer format. Congrats on your top story!
Woah, thank you for the trip. I enjoyed the imagery. What struck me most was the brave use of discriptive language- at last, a poet with a vision.
You write many beautiful stories, I request you to open my vocal ID
Beautiful scene setting.
Thumbs up for your effort! Keep the outstanding work—congrats!
Beautiful. Even melodic.
That last line gave me chills. Amazing work!
I was sucked into this story immediately! I definitely want more, but as it stands, it was so poignant.
You have a poetic way with the telling of this story. Other may not like revenge as a motive or way of life. But that is the way it was and I felt the anguish.
Oh my goodness, I had just begun to read. Why must there always be revenge, retribution and more war. Otto will never be at peace now, the son goes to fight some more. Lovely writing.
You really drew me into the setting and emotional rawness of the character. Didn’t want it to end! Great micro!
"Otto never wanted his children to be warriors." There is so much sadness in this simple yet profound statement. This piece was beautifully done!