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A Relationship The Can Be Fix

Mending Broken Bridge

By Mariann CarrollPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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A Relationship The Can Be Fix
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Susie misses Jake, they been away from each other for six months.

They were giving each other space. Jake misses Susie, sleep elude him at night. All he can think of the time they spent together. Susie wanted space, she felt smothered by Jake.

“Should I call Jake? Will he forgive me?” Susie thought.

Ring, Ring, Ring !!!!!! Jake phone interrupted his thoughts, “ Should I answer the phone or not?”

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)12 months ago

    Answer the phone 📱💬😉

  • Will Shimnom Simon12 months ago

    This story!!! I believe communication is the key, but we often don't know that. We are too scared of what the call might be about.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)12 months ago

    Oooo! I like wonder what will happen next! Nicely done Mariann!

  • I never seem to be able to answer either question correctly. Is there a right answer?

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