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A Brother's Promise

Based on True Events

By Tristan BiggsPublished 11 months ago 7 min read
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A BROTHER’S PROMISE:

In the midst of the Rhodesian bush war, where turbulent times prevailed, two brothers, Axel and Paul Renaud, forged a bond that transcended the chaos that surrounded them. Axel, the elder of the two, had become a military doctor, dedicated to healing the wounded and saving lives. Paul, on the other hand, soared through the skies as a helicopter pilot for the Rhodesian Air Force, fearlessly navigating the treacherous landscapes below.

Their lives intersected one fateful day when Axel received a distress call from a stranded community situated deep behind enemy lines. The residents were in dire need of medical aid, and Axel, driven by his commitment to his duty, immediately organized a mercy mission to assist them. He knew the dangers that lay ahead, but the desire to save lives eclipsed any personal concerns.

With Axel on board to provide medical support and Paul expertly manoeuvring the helicopter, they set off on their mission, soaring over the war-torn landscapes of Rhodesia. The deafening sound of gunfire and explosions echoed below as they ventured further into hostile territory, their hearts racing with a blend of anticipation and trepidation.

Suddenly, their helicopter was engulfed in a barrage of enemy fire. The deafening sound of bullets ripping through the air filled their ears, and before they knew it, their aircraft plummeted towards the ground, crashing with a force that reverberated through their souls. The brothers were tossed around like rag-dolls, their bodies battered and bruised.

Axel, his instincts honed by years of military training, fought against the pain that gnawed at his body. He mustered every ounce of strength to crawl towards his brother, who lay gravely wounded, blood seeping from his injuries. Axel's hands trembled as he worked frantically to stabilize Paul, attempting to halt the bleeding and ease his pain. But it was clear that the wounds were too severe, and time was slipping away.

Paul, his face pale and his voice weak, gripped Axel's hand with the little strength he had left. Tears welled up in his eyes as he mustered the strength to speak, his voice barely a whisper. "Axel... promise me... promise me you'll take care of my girls," he pleaded, his love for his daughters shining through his pain.

Axel's heart shattered at his brother's request, but he knew he had to honour it. He squeezed Paul's hand, his voice choked with emotion. "I promise, Paul. I will raise Andrea, Marie, and Jade as if they were my own. They will never be alone."

With those words, Paul's grip on Axel's hand weakened, and his breath grew shallow. The life slowly drained from his body, leaving Axel alone with the weight of his brother's final wish. Grief engulfed him as he cradled Paul's lifeless form, knowing that from this day forward, he would bear the responsibility of being a father figure to his brother's three beloved daughters.

The doctor and the three troops that survived the crash were casevaced to the hospital in Bulawayo, where they were treated for their injuries. A second chopper had been dispatched as soon as Paul had radioed the mayday call through to the command centre. Thus the mission was a success, but at a terrible cost. Apart from Paul, five of the members of the local guard force, whose task it was to protect the helicopter from attack, lost their lives as well.

The passing of Paul Renaud weighed heavily on his wife Melissa's heart, leaving her shattered and consumed by grief. The pain she felt seemed insurmountable, and it cast a dark cloud over her life. Struggling to find solace, Melissa sought refuge in substances that promised temporary respite from her anguish.

Her journey through depression was a tumultuous one, as drugs and alcohol became her crutches, albeit misguided ones. In her vulnerable state, she believed they could numb her pain, grant her escape, or offer fleeting moments of reprieve. But instead of providing the solace she desperately sought, they entangled her further in a web of despair.

Melissa's battle with addiction and her recurring attempts to end her own life were deeply distressing for her family, especially for Axel and her daughters. Axel recognized that he had made a promise to his brother not only to care for his daughters but also to support Melissa during their shared grief.

With unwavering determination, Axel sought professional help for Melissa, reaching out to therapists and counsellors who specialized in grief and addiction. He knew that her healing journey required expert guidance and support beyond what he alone could provide.

But, despite Axel’s efforts, Melissa’s mental state became so serious that the authorities were forced to intervene, and the three girls were taken away from her. Sadly they also separated the sisters from one another before Axel could even step in. He ended up only being able to legally adopt Andrea, the other two going to different foster parents.

The turn of events weighed heavily on Axel's heart as he witnessed the unravelling of Melissa's mental health and the subsequent separation of the sisters. Despite his best efforts, the authorities determined that it was in the best interest of the girls to be placed in different foster homes. Axel was devastated by the decision but resolved to provide the best life he could for Andrea, the niece he was able to adopt.

With Andrea now under his care, Axel poured all his love and attention into ensuring her well-being. He created a stable and nurturing environment, offering her a sense of security and a refuge from the chaos she had experienced. Together, they grieved the loss of Marie and Jade, their shared longing for their presence serving as a constant reminder of the void in their lives.

Although physically separated, Axel remained dedicated to maintaining a connection between the sisters. He sought legal avenues to regain custody of Marie and Jade, but the legal system posed its own set of challenges and obstacles. Axel's determination, however, remained unwavering, fueled by his love for his nieces and his promise to their late father.

In the meantime, Axel maintained open lines of communication with Marie and Jade's foster families, ensuring that they knew about the girls' connection and the importance of maintaining contact between the sisters. He encouraged regular visits and facilitated communication, striving to preserve the bond they shared, even if it meant their physical separation continued for the time being.

Axel never gave up hope, tirelessly exploring every avenue to reunite the sisters. He remained a pillar of strength and support for Andrea, teaching her the importance of resilience, love, and family. Together, they held onto the belief that one day, Marie and Jade would be reunited with them, forming an unbreakable bond of sisterhood once more.

Years passed, and Axel's determination bore fruit. Through a series of legal battles and diligent efforts, he managed to gain custody of Marie and Jade, reuniting the sisters under his loving care. The joy and relief that washed over the family were immeasurable, as they finally found solace in being together once again.

With the family reunited, Axel's home became a sanctuary, a place where the wounds of the past could heal and new memories could be forged. The Renaud sisters, Andrea, Marie, and Jade, grew closer with each passing day, leaning on one another for support and finding solace in their shared experiences.

Though the scars of their tumultuous journey remained, the Renaud family emerged stronger than ever. Axel's unwavering love and dedication had not only kept the promise he made to his brother but had also given the sisters a chance to rebuild their lives together. In their shared resilience, they found the strength to overcome their past and embrace the future with renewed hope and unbreakable bonds of sisterhood.

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About the Creator

Tristan Biggs

I was born in Rhodesia (now called Zimbabwe) and currently live in South Africa. From an early age, I seemed to have a knack for poetry. I have written a number of stories, poems, and several novels, ranging from fantasy to non fiction.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Nobody11 months ago

    Must say, good one

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