Families logo

Hernandez House At The End Of Antler Circle

Family Legacy Re-do

By T Rain AKA Edger Ai BingtonPublished 3 days ago 7 min read

The sun, a giant fiery Ojo de Dios, glared down on Antler Circle, baking the dusty street and casting short shadows from the stoic oak trees. At the end of the circle, the old Hernandez house stood like a weathered bullfighter, its sun-bleached brick coat bearing the scars of time. This house, once a boisterous nest brimming with laughter and spicy chorizo smells, now echoed with a different kind of silence: the hush of generations past and the quiet of dwindling disuse.

Abuelo Miguel sat on the porch, his strong bony hands wrapped around a steaming mug of café de olla. His wife, Abuela Esperanza, hummed a lullaby she used to sing to their 36 grandchildren, her faded eyes fixed on the parched earth where a vibrant garden once flourished. The continued droughts had turned their Eden into a cracked battlefield, and the recent torrential downpours, instead of quenching the thirsty soil, had only eroded beneath the concrete foundation, tilting the house ever so slightly, like a ship battling unseen currents and high winds.

MS Copilot Designer

Miguel could feel the fatigue in the bones of the house. The creaks on the stairs had a deepened tone, the laughter lines in the floorboards appeared etched with tears. The solar panels, once humming with the symphony of self-sufficiency, now produced a strained drone, barely enough to power the memories dancing in the dusty corners.

That evening, under the silvery cloak of a star filled sky, Esperanza spoke, her voice barely a whisper, “Miguel, what will happen to our casa? To our legacy?”

Miguel’s heart physically slowed in his chest. The thought of his beloved nest becoming a ghost, just a hushed whisper of what once was, was impossible to bear. But the despair he was feeling was something he had never known. It was a luxury they never could afford. This house, this living archive of their love story, started by his Abuelos and now a testament to their family’s resilience, deserved a fighting chance. They decided right then it would now face all the fight and fury of Los Abuelos, no matter how slow that might happen!

MS Copilot Designer

The next morning, Miguel gathered the tools his Padre had passed down from his Padre, each worn handle declared the tales of generations who knew how to coax life from the harshest land. Esperanza brought out her Abuela’s herbal remedies, potent concoctions born and carried through ages of wisdom and necessity.

They started with the land. Miguel nurtured the surviving fig trees, hoping their shade would draw back the birds and bees. Esperanza sprinkled her concoction on the thirsty earth, whispering ancient prayers for rain. They mended cracks in the foundation, sang las viejas canciones to the house, weaving their voices into its very fabric.

Slowly, hesitantly, life responded. One at a time, single green shoots nudged their way through the parched earth. A hummingbird, shimmering like a jewel, dipped its beak into a new bloom on the fig tree. So sweet was the nectar, she built her nest in the top branches and stated a new brood. The solar panels, cleaned and shiny once again, fully catching the sun’s blessing, hummed a strong electric buzz and spurred the air conditioner to create a cool oasis inside the walls.

Time, with all that it could muster, was full steam ahead. Now the days were turning into weeks a little faster, the transformation became a hushed prayer, then a full chorus. Tiny wildflowers bloomed in cracks. Bees buzzed a happy tune. One by one, neighbors, remembering the warmth of the Hernandez casa, offered a helping hand, sharing seeds, stories, and wishes of hope.

While the house on the end of Antler Circle couldn’t quite regain its youthful vigor, instead it found a new strength, a seasoned wisdom. It learned to bend with the drought, to dance with the storms, to sing with the wind. It wasn’t just a brick and wood shell anymore; it was a living tapestry woven with loss, and the colorful threads making a strong resilience to renew itself

One evening weeks later, sitting on the porch under the ever watchful gaze of the stars, Miguel and Esperanza held hands. Their eyes, though marked by time, shone with a quiet fire that spoke this ancient grito: VIVA!.

“Our casa, mi vida,” Miguel said, his voice hoarse with emotion, “it will stand. Not just with bricks and wood, but with the stories we weave, the memories we share, the love we pass on.”

Esperanza smiled, a single tear tracing a silver path down her cheek. “It will live,” she whispered, “as long as we remember. As long as there is someone to sing its song.”

And so, the house on Antler Circle did not succumb to the winds and ravishes of time. It became a beacon, a tall symbol to the enduring spirit of a family, a solemn promise that even in the face of hardship, love, like a tenacious vine, could find a way to climb, and to bloom again. In its weathered walls, the echoes of 36 children’s laughter mingled with the quiet determination of two old souls, whispering a timeless truth: a house isn’t just bricks and wood, it’s the heart that beats within it, and for the Hernandez Familia, that heart would continue to beat, long after the last brick crumbled.

MS Copilot Designer

That very weekend, the surprising knock on the Hernandez door came just as Miguel finished mending a loose brick. With Esperanza’s encouraging smile, he opened the door to find Trina, his niece, tears glistening on her cheeks. Her four young children, wide-eyed and nervous, huddled behind her dress.

Trina’s news, whispered through choked sobs, echoed the quiet tragedy that had already touched the house. Manuel, her husband, had succumbed to a sudden illness, leaving her adrift in a sea of grief that shaken to her to core of her soul. So she looked to Miguel and Esperanza, pulling on all of her childhood memories of laughter and warmth in this house now offering her family the only safe port in a storm she didn’t know how to navigate alone.

Miguel and Esperanza embraced her and the children, the old house sighing with relief as its walls welcomed home another lost soul and her family. The children, initially wary, were soon swept up in a whirlwind of love and laughter. Abuela Esperanza’s stories, spiced with cinnamon and sprinkled with wisdom, became their bedtime lullabies. Miguel’s quiet patience coaxed them out of their shells, teaching them the working of tools along with seasonal rhythm of gardening and the secrets of the land.

MS Copilot Designer

One sunny afternoon, while the children chased butterflies across the recovering garden where they had toiled with their Tio, Trina sat on the porch with Esperanza, sipping sweet tea infused with mint. As they exchanged stories of new and old times and shared acquaintances, Esperanza mentioned Roberto, Trina’s childhood friend. He too had lost his wife, Amelia, after her and Roberto’s long valiant battle with illness.

A spark flickered in Trina’s eyes. Roberto. The boy who shared her scraped knees and secret dreams. Roberto, the boy who was just the right amount of frivolous fun and kindness and respect at all times all rolled into one. He was a neighborhood “favorite son” all those years ago. The boy who had left for college and life, only to return, bearing the scars of loss. Esperanza, sensing the possibility of her need to heal, nudged Trina gently.

Through the magical suggestions of his wife, the next day, Miguel set off to find Roberto. He found him in his brother’s small casita in the old neighborhood. He had cleverly made up a story so as not shock Roberto by his sudden appearance, He could plainly see that Roberto was still lost in a maze of grief and memories. Miguel’s words, seasoned with shared experiences, were like a gentle cooling breeze, stirring him from his self-imposed isolation. Miguel spoke of Trina, of the empty space she occupied in the Hernandez house, of the hope that flickered like a candle in the wind for her.

That evening, Roberto stood on the Hernandez porch, hesitant yet drawn by an invisible thread. The sight of Trina, her eyes holding both grief and a glimmer of hope, sent a tremor through him. They spoke little, their words choked by the weight of shared loss, yet their eyes, two mirrors reflecting the pain and the tiniest echo of resilience spoke volumes.

Time continued to pass slowly again, but as days turned into weeks, the house on Antler Circle became a crucible of healing for not just Trina and Roberto, but for the house who felt each warn wave of healing. The house felt children’s laughter that filled the air, chasing away the shadows of grief. Trina and Roberto found solace in shared memories, their unspoken understanding blooming like the tenacious wildflowers in the garden. Along with the children, they tended to the house and helped Abuelo and Abuela, with both the brick and wood and they as one like the friends of old, made of good memories, strengthening its foundations with gentle support and unspoken dreams.

As one more starlit night embraced the house and it occupants, as they sat on the porch, Miguel and Esperanza watched their niece and their old friend laugh, a fragile melody accompanied with the gentle rustle of oak leaves. In their eyes, they saw not just grief and loss, but the possibility of new beginnings, of love rising from the ashes like a phoenix.

The house on Antler Circle, once teetering on the edge of oblivion, stood tall again. It had become a haven, not just for a family but for a community of broken hearts, each piece finding it’s place in the beautiful, ever continuing mosaic of life. The long line of 36 children’s laughter was joined by the voices of new chapters being written. Nothing would ever stop the enduring power of love, loss, and a spirit that blooms even in the harshest soil and conditions. In the nightly spectacle of moonlight and fireflies, Miguel and Esperanza knew that their beloved Casa, their Familia legacy, would live on in the beautifully woven blanket of warmly shared stories, and of nurtured hopes. The unending song they all made, old and new, forever bound by love and the magic of their weathered home on the farthest end of Antler Circle.

extended family

About the Creator

T Rain AKA Edger Ai Bington

At aged 70 I started to write. I'm a short story writer. I'm a hobby writer, not chasing money, but an audience is very much appreciated. I develop ideas and write from my imagination for family, friends and fellow writers.

Enjoyed the story?
Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (1)

  • Esala Gunathilake3 days ago

    Liked your work Rain. Keep going.

T Rain AKA Edger Ai BingtonWritten by T Rain AKA Edger Ai Bington

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.