With all Due Respect: Fourth Wing Critique
No Spoilers, I Swear!
I’ll start by saying, I’m hooked.
But I want to ask, is writing porn into novels attempts to avoid being branded the next Twilight?
There is much to like about Fourth Wing: Dragons, superpowers, challenges and betrayals.
Was it necessary to be so graphic?
Maybe, it was...
Fly... or Die!
- Authors Note:
A Quote from: Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros.
If you have read the book, you will understand that reference.
If not... well, read the book and you will!
Fly... or Die is a direct quote from the book.
This critique is especially for the Vocal Media Critique Challenge: Critique a popular work in just 50 words. This note is not part of my critique, just a bit of fun for fans while referencing a quote.
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Comments (3)
I think it's more likely to be an attempt to copy GoT than avoid being Twilight 😁
I've not read this book but it seems really cool! Excellent review!
I really liked this! Fly or die is a powerful command!