windows (pexels.com)
Hey, eyes wide open
vision clear not blurry now
Windows to a view.
______
A window down low
Go down and look up and open
For a different view.
(Here are two haikus about windows. In the second one the word 'different' I think is two syllables. In the first not sure if 'blurry' is one or two syllables. I know I should put these in POETS, but I am critiquing my own work.)
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