That ain't no trout, they say. It's a carp he got fast and bulbous on that one.
Well, that was a disappointment, as was learnin' how he made them noises with a group starved, ordered to make his noise, and waitin' on Zappa.
I'm still fishin' for such a beauty.
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Comments (9)
A critique as confusing as the album (I mean that as a compliment)! Though of fishy albums, with respect to Beefheart, I liked "Thing-Fish" bettah
Guess I am really out of touch. I have no clue what this is about???
Lol, no idea why this made me laugh! Awesome review!
I do believe they're correct. That doesn't look like a trout, lol!
Excellent
Terrific critique!!! Loved it!!!
Great critique!
nice
Nice work - check out a band called The Beasts of Bourbon - the vocalist (Tex Perkins) was a huge CB fan!