The Wrong Bride by Catharina Maura-A critique
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I loved that they overwrote each other's memories, had moments of honesty, and were destined to be together and fought too.Handled online bullying and other topics well. I want the story on Lex and Sierra. I wish she got pregnant to start their family and overwrite their experience with Hannah.
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