Merritt Xavier
Bio
"A little space to be creative"-from Unsplash picture by Toa Heftiba
Stories (69/0)
Inked in Fire-A critique
With less than a hundred pages this novella welcomes you to their world through the story behind Major Sethraun's scar. His partner, Queen Caesia asks what led to the scar on his hip and despite his hesitancy informs her. She is the ruler of Erawoen and in a relationship with the Orc. He is grateful for their relationship despite their first encounter's unfavourable circumstances. He is unfamiliar with the ways of courtship and is teased about it but their time together proved useful. As the "King of comfort" who never wanted to leave their haven he braces himself to tell the story with a sensitive topic due to her persistence. He is not unwilling to share it with her, he is only unsure how to begin.
By Merritt Xavier17 days ago in BookClub
Icebreaker by Hannah Grace-A critique
It didn't matter when we found out what happened to Aaron. I thought it was self-inflicted.Wanted more of Ryan. I hated that we didn't get to find out how their relationship worked since that was laced through the book but got skipped to them together and with an accidental pregnancy.
By Merritt Xavier9 months ago in Critique
The Princess Trap by Talia Hibbert-A critique
We had no idea where Lydia and her girls were going.What happened to Harald apart from the live streaming of his character? Hans' relationship felt forced, there were hints but nothing really.Did Cherry still create the business she wanted or did she go back to being HR at the academy?
By Merritt Xavier9 months ago in Critique
The Wrong Bride by Catharina Maura-A critique
I loved that they overwrote each other's memories, had moments of honesty, and were destined to be together and fought too.Handled online bullying and other topics well. I want the story on Lex and Sierra. I wish she got pregnant to start their family and overwrite their experience with Hannah.
By Merritt Xavier9 months ago in Critique