The Princess Trap by Talia Hibbert-A critique
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We had no idea where Lydia and her girls were going.What happened to Harald apart from the live streaming of his character? Hans' relationship felt forced, there were hints but nothing really.Did Cherry still create the business she wanted or did she go back to being HR at the academy?
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