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The Old Man and the Sea

If I count my words different than you do I still have to use 50

By The Invisible WriterPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Top Story - August 2023

An old man, a sea

A weathered determination

A journey taken, a boat worn

DiMaggio in newspaper pages

Three days fishing, a Marlin

Blood in the water, Mako sharks

Strength of courage, of love, told in a tale

A boy’s dedication, a skeleton

Dreams of lions on an African beach

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    Written by The Invisible Writer