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Swinging

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By Mark GrahamPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
girl on swing (pexels.com)

Back and forth you

go higher and higher

on living your life.

(How would you describe swinging on a swing? I started out as if I was swinging as in line one 'back and forth' moving on to line two and as we get 'higher and higher' in all our various perspectives on how we are living our lives.) Please share your thoughts.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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    Written by Mark Graham