The epitome of daddy issues realized in an order that only makes sense with a family as dysfunctional as these poor characters.
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Marissa Elizabeth
Hi and thanks for checking out my page! I love writing fantasy, epic love stories, and poems about bugs. I've previously been published in Second Story Journal and the Carolina Muse, so feel free to check me out there as well.
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The Amazing Life of a Depressed Girl
Chapter 24: The mountain That's the thing about it: I always knew I wasn't meant to lead a boring life, that I wouldn't be able to accept it. And all these things I've done and accomplished so far prove it, but it still all seems like what I need is at an arm's reach. Like if I can just get to the next thing, I'll feel like I've done something.
By Marissa Elizabeth9 months ago in Chapters
When We Were Very Young
In another box set that my parents got me when I was younger contained four books by A.A. Milne. 'When We Were Very Young' is a collection of poems that Milne wrote for his son Christopher Robin. This is a book that is full of references to Mr. Edward Bear, but a lot of the poems give some various descriptions of life of a very young child and where, when, how and why they do what they do. The illustrations are quite cute for you can see what Christopher Robin is and may be thinking. Also, Pooh Bear does make his self-known at various points. I have read these verses many, many times over the years and each time make me feel good about myself.
By Mark Graham7 days ago in Critique
NYC Driving Nightmare
In the bustling chaos of New York City, the battle between cars and public transportation rages on. The city, with its ever-expanding network of bike lanes and bus lanes, seems determined to throttle car commuting into submission. These new lanes, dubbed "slave lines" by frustrated drivers, restrict cars to single lanes, making each journey a slow, grinding ordeal.
By FOYI.IDK GIFTS3 days ago in Critique
Trauma Carnival
I have unpopular opinions on one of my old favorites, The L Word. First is: Jenny is my favorite character. Second: The show was originally about Jenny, her trauma, her broken identity and the way her sexuality was explored as an awakening that brought up many memories of childhood abuse.
By Melissa Ingoldsby6 days ago in Art
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