Spider-Man: Lotus in Fifty Words
A short critique of a long fan film
It's okay that the animation isn't great.
It's fine that some of the acting is stinted.
Even the bad monologues are passable.
It's a fan film. I get it.
But why does it take an hour for things to start?
And who the fuck put Peter Parker in a turtleneck?
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Great job❗Lmao🤣The Turtle Neck-