Sleeping Beauties by Owen and Stephen King
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I used to be a major Stephen King fan, but this book destroyed any enjoyment his work gave me. It is dull and drawn out way too long for no more of a plot than it has. Plus, the actions of the people are unbelievable. I don’t recommend this book.
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I am not a Stephen King fan, although if I wasn't so anti horrow/fright I might. Thank you for your critique, I won't start with this one 😉
I just cannot stand a slow dragged out plot. Thank you so much for letting us know about this book!
Haven’t read this one, but share your sentiments regarding many of his newer novels.
Thanks for the honest and raw feedback of this book. I haven’t read it but thanks to you I never will. Lol