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On Poetry On Vocal

Observations

By Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred Published about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 2 min read
The top Twelve Poetry Stories At The time Of Writing

Introduction

I am wondering how to present this without sounding like a whiny complainant, but because I am not popular with Vocal or Creators, it will come across as that, whatever I say.

This is a two-year-old piece on how Top Stories are chosen

I don't miss out on any of their requirements, but I do feel they have a favoured creators list which they, of course, don't mention and would deny exists, but when you see people who haven't dropped stories for a while get Top Stories within hours of publication, that implies favouritism.

So What Have I Observed?

In the last twelve Top Stories in Poetry on Vocal, only one was not free form, and that is this one (indicated in the main image):

This was an excellent series of rhyming quartets with a great image for the poem.

This is not a denigration or criticism of free-form poetry. I find it difficult because I prefer to have a framework to work in, and feel that if I do not have a form, rhyming and a consistent number of syllables per line, I feel that what I am doing is wrong. That is my opinion of what I do.

When you submit your poem, you are given the options of Acrostic, Sonnet, Villanelle, Pantoum, Ekphrastic (though this is not a form but what the poem does), Sestina, and a few more that I will check when I submit this.

I now have five forms that I use

  • Terza Rima (Thanks Calvin)
  • Sonnet
  • Villanelle
  • Pantoum
  • Sestina
  • I almost feel that bars me from a Top Story or challenge placement; however, my latest book, my collaboration with Angie Livingstone, which is selling very well and has made a lot of money in royalties, contains examples of all these forms of poetry.

    Readers do like these poetic forms; I know from the comments that are left on them. A few other creators feel the same as I do about this, but the only time Vocal acknowledges forms is in their Challenges, and usually it is a haiku to generate a lot of entries (though to write a perfect haiku is very difficult or diffic, as Doctor John Cooper Clarke says). Vocal now won't accept images, so here is that poem

    β€œTo freeze the moment

    In seventeen syllables

    Is very diffic

    - Haiku No. 1”

We can suggest subjects for challenges, so maybe a poetry challenge using one of our favourite forms:

Conclusion

I was thinking of submitting this to Poets and concluding with a poem, but really, it is a critique, so I will drop it there.

Thank you for reading. I really appreciate it.

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