My Critique of "The Journey Is On" by Paul Stewart

Introduction

First, this is a clever way to get more people to read your work, and critiquing one of your Vocal stories will add a few more 0.6c to your account.

The main challenge is here. If you haven't read it yet, that's another 0.6c for Paul, and by reading this, you've given me another 0.6c.

This is the piece I am critiquing, Paul's first piece on Vocal, which I had not read:

The music I've included is "The One And Only" by Chesney Hawkes. I loved that it was used as the wake-up alarm in Duncan Jones' (David Bowie's son, initially christened Zowie Bowie) film "Moon. You need to watch the film to realise the significance.

My Critique of "The Journey Is On" by Paul Stewart

I often check out the first Vocal post of many creators, although mine was an expanded straight lift from my blog.

Paul's is interesting, telling us about how he came onto the Vocal writing platform after years of technical writing for his job, and how he was looking for a way where he could feel truly appreciated.

If you are paid for your writing but not credited, it can make you feel unappreciated, but Paul took this first step, and we all know how deservedly successful he has been on Vocal since he put down those first words.

This piece may be worth sharing with others who are yet to dip their toes into Vocal publishing.

I would recommend that you take a read of it, if you have not already read it, and discover a little more about the creative origins of probably the most successful and appreciated Vocal creator.