Through her young, angry eyes,
She peers from inside glass walls
That all want to throw stones at.
Grief tears apart her anger from the loss of a dear friend,
Growing into an independent, free woman.
Fiery eyes set her soul into eternal faith,
Twin Strings unbroken, Edward & Jane.
About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos,
I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels
The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books
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Comments (5)
I think this is a wonderful review 😍
Gosh, this is STUNNING! What a perfect depiction of the story!
In a glance, I misread it as Edward and John 😅 I love that you wrote a poem for this challenge!
Woohoo! Great job and love me some Jane Eyre; was waiting for you to do this! 😁
You really want me to read this book, don't you, Melissa, lol?