Set in what is now a more realistic than ever future. Depictions of failed society in ever growing distractions.
Capitalizing in the failure to hold tangible intelligence.
This chaotic government of idols with ruined world. Humans just a scannable code with crossed wires. Much like our current “not sure” future.
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Sarah urffer
Let words find you with a fun and playful creativeness.
I have some older works I’ll be adding including new creations as well. I do hope you enjoy them. I wish there was a feedback section 😜
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An eye opening intense film exposing the dark side of substance abuse. yearning for love and acceptance, with eyes wide shut. This film cracks open the reality of abuse prescribed or illicit. Unfolding the destruction of family and love. A scary reality. Cringy extreme deep dive into a cloudy morality.
By Sarah urffer9 months ago in Critique
Second Grade
Who out there remembers Second grade? Second grade was the time that I learned about 'cursive handwriting' and really quite enjoyed it. It was like doing art with words. I do remember I was not really one that was good with doing math skills at the time, but I did learn and remember these skills. This was the decade of the 'New Mathematics' that started when I was in First grade in 1970. The teacher also did more science and social studies and health lessons as well. My second-grade teacher was Miss Latimer and she was young and made learning fun.
By Mark Graham3 days ago in Critique
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The best bit about this was that everyone wore crocs, because the people who made the film thought this was the stupidest footwear ever. And then, not long after the film (and not because of it) crocs became really popular. 😂😂😂
I just saw this for the first time this year and almost cried at how much like life it felt like! Great critique 😁
Creative work at the critique - good job Sarah! 😊
Was this the one where they put Gatorade on the crops… and they failed? And the guy who suggested watering them was mocked until they realised he was right… and he became a hero?!?! Such an analogy for this actual world! Especially with the poison on our food, everyone getting sick, and no one connecting the dots 🙄