Kicked off with a gripping premise and clever escapes, but eventually derailed into a maze of absurdities.
Characters turned into pawns in questionable narrative choices, and the initial suspense transformed into forced surprises.
A drama that lost its way, burying the enticing premise beneath the weight of its own complexity.
About the Creator
Laur
My name is Laur and I put my heart into the words and embrace the beauty of love, life, music, and everything in between.
The Whiskered War
A domestic drama; rather, you're witnessing a millennium-old conflict over the fate of the entire planet (and possibly just a smA titanic struggle between wits and strength has been raging in the shadows for millennia: The Great Nibble vs. The Purrsecution. The cats, the furry fighters, the fascists of the feline world, occupy one corner. In the other, mice make up the squeaky squad, the small militia. The reward? Domination over the entire world (and possibly an especially tasty cheese wheel).
By Richard Webera day ago in Humor
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