Frankenstein
My critique of Mary Shelley's Frankenstein
Frankenstein forever remains the story of a man so broken by grief that he believed he could play God. However, he never understood the price of creation and spent his life running. In the end he remained the one haunted and never found peace.
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Matthew Mccahey
I want to use stories and life experiences to allow others to be open about their own.
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Delegating and Assigning
I was reading an article in a nursing newspaper 'The Pelican News' for April, May and June of this year. The article that I read feels like it could appeal to all professions is entitled 'Delegating and Assigning: What You Need to Know'. The author Cynthia Saver has blocked out at the end of the article 'Five Rights of Delegation'. I am going to retype these five verbatim for I do not want to misinterpret them.
By Mark Graham7 days ago in Critique
We'z Walking on a Path Ruled By Numbers
This road has felt endless, yet limited; every step tracked. Inching away along this path, I feel trapped. Confined. Left to this narrow passage that may one day amount to something greater. Time is not a concept. Only distance. From start to finish, I laugh and cry and attempt to convince myself that this is worth it. I cannot stray. I must keep going. Every step etched, is a step taken, is measured as more than before. I cannot even recall how I got here. Maybe I don’t even really exist. Just another tick marking off a perceived presence. Of what though? I am just another line drawn. Nothing more, nothing less.
By Oneg In The Arctic6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (5)
Your response is so THOUGHTFUL, id est: on the bell curve it would hit maybe the 95th percentile by that standard? I am learning to move around on Vocal. :) Just figured out how to subscribe to your stories for free. Can't tip because I am broke!
I LOVE THIS BOOK
Wonderful critique!!! Loving it!!!💕❤️❤️
Where have you’ve been Matthew? This is your first story in a very long time !!! Welcome back !!! This was great and on point.
He made his miserable life even more miserable. Excellent review!