Critique Challenge Critique
Full Circle Peak Critique Critique!
50 words to critique whatever you want.
A lesson in brevity.
You can critique anything. novels, albums, movies, sculptures, paintings, online content, hats. No not hats. Unless it was a very famous hat. Then you could critique that hat.
The famous hat that King Charles wears, oh yeah, the crown.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!
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When We Were Very Young
In another box set that my parents got me when I was younger contained four books by A.A. Milne. 'When We Were Very Young' is a collection of poems that Milne wrote for his son Christopher Robin. This is a book that is full of references to Mr. Edward Bear, but a lot of the poems give some various descriptions of life of a very young child and where, when, how and why they do what they do. The illustrations are quite cute for you can see what Christopher Robin is and may be thinking. Also, Pooh Bear does make his self-known at various points. I have read these verses many, many times over the years and each time make me feel good about myself.
By Mark Graham7 days ago in Critique
Dr. Zhivago
Boris Pasternak wrote the novel 'Dr. Zhivago' that is quite a piece of Russian literature that is to me and was quite enjoyable even though it was a romance story. The story is set during the Russian Revolution and a family's search for freedom. Pasternak is quite the show and tell author for this novel to me is quite detailed in describing the settings, the characters and the basic theme of the book.
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Example of this "Sane Spot"
My dear friends, The history of the Crown is rarely told and more rarely seen so people do not wonder of its origins- The real story is that it was made up of stones from bloodthirsty conquered countries and stolen from the real owners and given as a prize to the the conquering monarch at the time.
Hey dude, congrats on your hat-tastic leaderboard placement. ☺️🎉🎉
My question is, is a crown considered to be a hat? If not, why would it considered to be all that? Most people already have a decently shaped head. So why put a crown atop of a crown? Shouldn't we display the ones that we have been given from birth and be proud, instead of hiding it behind a menagerie of cloth and jewels as a shroud?
thanks for the chuckles
Critiques are just one's opinions of a work of some kind.
Brilliant, well done Paul! 👏👏✨❤️
Chuckling: I enjoyed that. Congratulations on Top Story! 👏
Yayyyyyy! Congratulations on your Top Story! Here's your hat! 👑
LOL, I had to do a double take, because I thought that was a fake picture! He really walks around like that? Max’s crown in Where the Wild Things Are looks more respectable. 😆 Congrats! 🥂🍩👑
Haha, this is so fun! Nice one Paul!
This was wonderfully subversive! I loved the structure and flow of it! Also yeah, his majesty certainly does wear a very sparkly hat. I think it's worth more than my house, which is kind of a wild concept, eh?
Really liked this Paul - keep it up!
I think you can critique anything , well deserved accolade
Congratulations on achieving top story xx
I shared my comments under an older account. In short, it was a tribute to brevity in writing. I was inspired to aspire to that in my future writings. Thanks
Congrats on top story! And, well, there truly is quite a bit to say about that particular hat!
Congratulations Paul !!! 🎉🎉
😆I’m back! Nice one. Congrats on your top story Paul! 👑🎉 Have you noticed some people um.. are still doing mini critiques…not sure how as I thought the world limit was 600 in Critique bar the challenge. 🤔 I had a few more ready to go… might post them in poetry.. I dunno not sure yet. Hope you have a rad hat on and are enjoying the day! 😁
Congrats on top story! Good work!
This was nice change of pace to theses critiques
Love how cheeky this is! Congrats on the TS!
Hat with sparkly gems and fur, so last season...Congrats on the TS and thanks for the laugh.
Awesome 👍 😉👌🎉Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉👑
Yes, he indeed wears a very fancy, sparkly hat. Great work, Paul! I enjoyed this Critique critique. If I had seen this yesterday, I might have been tempted to do a Critique critique critique. ;)